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27.09.2020 02:21
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Hinotama 火の玉
27.09.2020 02:22
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Paragrapgh 1: It was 7:00am, I was late for my first day at Horikoshi high school. All I could hear was my sister Sakura Muttering on the phone with Ino Myiamoto, one of her best friends. This will be Sakura´s third and last year at Horikoshi high school, and this will be my first. I got out of bed, grabbed my phone and sat at the breakfast table with Sakura, my father, and mother before school.
27.09.2020 02:26
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Paragraph 2: “You're not going to sign up for basketball this year are you Eiji?” My father Takibi Sato asked. “Yes, yes father, I will sign up for basketball this year so I can be a professional basketball player, a hinotama!” I exclaimed with great enthusiasm. “You're never going to be a hinotama!” My father exclaimed looking at me in disappointment. ¨Eiji, Sakura your older sister has a scholarship for softball. She has had one since junior high, and there is no doubt that she will be a professional Softball player, and will be a hinotama.¨ My father said across the table. ¨Father, You know when I was born I always wanted to be a professional hinotama basketball player, but in order for me to do that I need to be able to control my chikara from my chakra points.¨ I stuttered trying to not get upset. ¨You are a disappointment to the Sato family, if you weren’t a good player or able to make the cut in the last 3 years, what makes you think you will make it this year and become a hinotama one day?”
27.09.2020 02:27
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..... My face dropped as those words, “What makes you think you will make it this year and become a hinotama one day” raced through my mind. “How can I become hinotama?” I asked myself. “Eiji?” my mother asked as she put the Eggs with furikake on the table. “If something is wrong then we need to talk” mom did not hear the conversation father and I had before she came into the dining area. I finished breakfast, went up to my room and grabbed my school bag. I hugged my mother then said a proper goodbye to my father.
27.09.2020 03:35
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Paragraph 3: I plugged in my headphones and connected them to my phone and played some tunes. I looked down at my phone to read the school announcements on their website to see what class I am in this year. “Eiji Sato, Riku Miyamoto, Miwako Fujiwara, Tenshi Fukuda, Niko Hatake, Haruto Mori” I read the first five other classmen allowed. As I was looking down at my phone I passed the school entrance so I kept walking down the path not knowing, then I bumped into a blond haired girl with blue streaks under her blond locks of hair.
27.09.2020 03:36
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Paragraph 4: She was on her phone too, I’m not sure what she was doing. I found myself on the ground and the mysterious girl as well, in a flash she had gone to my side, held out her hand and asked if I was okay. I looked up at her and blushed while saying “Yeah, thanks I'm okay. Are you okay?” “Yeah I’m okay, I have been through many different things, compared to them I was lucky enough to not have a scratch on me.” She replied blushing back at me.
27.09.2020 03:49
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Paragrapg 5: “I’m Niko Hatake, who might you be?” the girl helped me up and asked. “I’m Eiji Sato, nice to meet you Niko. I looked at the class schedule, looked like we are in the same class” I smiled looking at her and apologizing for her fall. “Hmm and so we shall be, why don’t we walk together there than” “Sure, since we are heading the same way.” I could tell she was blushing on her white skin. “Hatake” I repeated in my head because it sounds so familiar, “I’m sure that I have heard it somewhere.
27.09.2020 04:00
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Paragrpgh 6: Walking into the entrance of Horikoshi High School, Niko put her hand out in front of me and said “Wait, Eiji look! It's that boy, Haruto Mori” her face turned upside down. “I hate him so much, he thinks he is the best at everything and challenges every one to try and beat him, just because he is a part of the Mori clan. He has never lost a fight.” I could just see her grinding her teeth and clenching her fists. “Since he is close by here, I think I will give him a piece of my mind” “Niko wait, do you wanna get suspended on the first day at Horikoshi High?” I begged her not to go over there grabbing her wrist. “I guess you’re right.” she sighed. “I am gonna get you someday Haruto Mori” she yelped at Haruto. Haruto just groaned, giving her the “back off” eye.
27.09.2020 04:03
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Paragrph 7" “Well if it isn’t Eiji Sato and Niko Hatake” Ino Miyamoto said yelling from the road all the way to the doors or the high school. “When did you two hook up?” Ino said running up to Niko and I. “Hooked up? No ones hooked up with anyone, we just meet” I said to Ino trying not to blush. “I have to go to class now catch you guys up later, Oh upperclassmen” I bowed to Ino as I ran to the other side of the door just close enough to hear Ino’s and Niko’s conversation.
27.09.2020 04:09
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Paragraph 8: “Niko Hatake” Ino smirked at Niko. “Ino Miyamoto” Niko reverted the smirk. “You are such a little pest, stay away from Eiji, he’s mine his dreams are my dreams, his life is my life, his everything is my everything, so just stay away from the man of my dreams Niko” “ We had just met, and we didn’t hook up, you want him? Then take him don't be such a jerk about it okay Ino. I might like him for now, but I am not in love with him like you” Niko replied, reaching for the school door handle. I ran to the next hallway up the stairs and to my locker trying not to blush.
27.09.2020 04:18
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Paragraph 9: I got into my class and looked where to sit. I saw Niko in the far back corner and I went near her. I guess you could say that I had a temporary crush on her but that was only for now. “Hi, is this seat taken?” I asked her, carrying my bag. “No, you can sit there” She replied blushing. “What do you think of me? Like who am I to you?” “Well, I would say that you are a really close friend, and I am kinda happy that I ran into on the way here” “Yeah, surprisingly me too” she blushed looking at her fingers.
27.09.2020 04:28
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Paragraph 10: “You must be Eiji Sato, my sister told me so much about you and how annoying you are,” Riku Miyamoto said looking down at me. “Why would you care though, I am sure I can figure out a strategy to ignore you” I turned and looked at him with a distressed look. “Oh, sorry didn’t see you there did you say something?” I said hoping to irritate him. “You know that I was the one talking to you, that technique of pretending to ignore me does not work on me” Riku replied smiling a devious smile. “Only fools would know to use that trick in ignorance of irritation” He smirked at me making me look like an idiot. “Has this seat been taken?”Riku pointed at the one next to me. “Sadly no” I huffed and puffed watching him put his stuff on his desk and in the chair.
27.09.2020 04:59
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Paragrapg 11: “Okay attendance, the thing we have all been waiting for” Senju Sensei laughed. “Fujiwara Miwako” “Present” as she smiled at Haruto like she had a crush on him or something. “Fukuda Tenshi” “Present” he gave a salty look to sensei. “Hatake Niko” “Present Sensei” she blushed then looked at me then back at her fingers. “Mori Haruto” “Present” he said, like he has something against Hina “Mori Hina” “Here sir” she exclaimed with joy to be in highschool. “Miyamoto Riku” “Present” looking as if Sensei had a grudge on him already. “Eiji Sato” There was no answer. “Eiji, Senju Sensei is calling you for attendance” Riku wishperd to me. “Oh shoot, sorry. I was just messing with my fingers” I whispered back to Riku. “Nothing like the present sensei” I said loud enough for Senju Sensei to hear me.
27.09.2020 18:27
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HEADS UP I CHANGED SENJU SENSEI'S NAME TO SARUTOBI SENSEI JUST A HEADS UP
27.09.2020 18:27
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Paragraph 12: “Well then, let's get into the lesson shall we?” Sarutobi Sensei smiled looking at every individual in the room. “The first part of this lesson is my introducing myself and introducing yourselves.” Sensei told us as he took the first turn of introducing. “As you know I am Sarutobi Sensei, I am a descendant of the third hokage of the Land of Fire. I am also a coach in Kendo fighting and was once myself a professional, but not a hinotama. My dream when I was younger was to become a hinotama in Kendo, and be the best of the best. After the final round of Kendo fighting to get in to World Wide championship, I broke my wrist in the National Championships.” Sensei looked down and frowned but then quickly looked up and smiled to say, “Okay that was my introduction now, who wants to go next?”
27.09.2020 18:28
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Paragraph 13: “Kendo fighter eh? I am a champ in Kendo fighting” Mori Haruto looked into Sarutobi Sensei’s eyes proudly. “I will go next” Haruto spoke with confidence. “Hmph” Mori Hina groaned and was embarrassed by Haruto. “Okay Haruto, take the stage” Sarutobi Sensei told Haruto. “Sir, you don't have to talk to us like we are grade schoolers.” Haruto mocked the teacher. Sensei looked down with a frown and blushed in embarrassment. “I am Haruto Mori, I am one one of the head family members of the Mori clan. I started doing Kendo fighting when I was 3 years of age, my dream is to become a professional Kendo fighter and become a hinotama so that dishonor does not come to the Mori clan. My rival is my sister, Hina Mori is my rival, I have to defeat Hina so that even the nonhead family member will still have honor. That is my reason to live, that is my Mori clan way.” Haruto said as he went back to his seat and stared at Hina, probably wanting to see her expression after his introduction.
27.09.2020 18:28
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Paragraph 14: “Okay, well then that was interesting. Who wants to go next? We will go with Niko Hatake” Sensei said, looking in the back row at me and Niko. “Thank you Sensei, I will introduce myself,” Niko said pleasantly, starring a death look to Haruto. “Anyway, I am Niko Hatake, I am a descendant from other Hatakes that I have never known. The most famous Hatake is Kakashi Hatake, also known as the sixth Hokage in the Land of Fire. I am a Soccer player, and I am the best on the team, at least that is what coach says. My dream is to be a professional soccer player and be the fastest soccer hinotama. That is my introduction. Thank you for your participation.” Niko said with enthusiasm and attitude.
27.09.2020 18:29
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Paragraph 15: Niko turned to sit in her seat and whispered “Eiji, I want you to go next. Don’t be a scaredy cat, okay!” Even though Niko was whispering I could still tell that she was yelling. I nodded understanding while I was looking down and drawing faces on my finger tips. Then I threw out both of my hands giving her a double thumbs up, on my fingertips were derpy faces so that is what she saw, derpy faces. She laughed so loud that Senju Sensei asked me to go since I was talking.
27.09.2020 18:30
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Paragraph 16: “Okay no problem, I wanted to go next anyway” I smiled big and looked in the back row at Niko as I stood up front, then Riku came into view. I saw say retired under his breath so I got a little mushy for a second, saying a bunch of retairded things under my breath. “Okay, I am Eiji Sato. I am the second born of Takibi Sato. My older sister is Sakura Sato. She is a 3rd year student at this highschool. I have always loved basketball,” I said looking down and taking a couple second breaths. I looked up and saw Niko’s eyes glimmer. “I have been playing basketball with my cousin for over 4 years now once a week and not made much progress. When I signed up for basketball club in grade school last year and the years before then, I signed up but there were always people better than me so they didn’t need me. From those last several years I learned new stuff every year and I practiced and perfected every single move that I tried to get into the team this year. ---
27.09.2020 18:31
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--- My dream is to become a professional basketball player and be the best basketball hinotama. That is my dream and I will become the hinotama, the best ever you wait and see, believe it!” Eiji gave the thumbs up to the entire class. “Eiji, I have a have a very important question for you”
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Paragraph 17: “Yes Sarutobi Sensei, is something wrong? “No I just am a little confused on how Niko Hatake and I are in the same class. And when you said believe it you reminded me of some people.” “Oh really Sensei? Who?” “You don't have to be related to Naruto Uzamaki the seventh hokage and Naruto’s father the fourth hokage do you?” Sensei studied my face. “Well as a matter of fact I do! I am a descendant of Naruto’s daughter, Himawari.” I responded confused a bit. “No wonder, you sound just like Naruto. I met him before a couple of times because we were friends as a Sarutobi and an Uzamaki.” “Wow, so you mean that the third hokage’s descendant, the sixth hokage’s descendant, and the fourth plus seventh hokage’s descendant are in the same school room?” I exclaimed questionaly. “Yes, what a surprise. I could see the hokages in each one of you.
27.09.2020 19:40
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Paragraph 18: The day went by fast. After school Sarutobi Sensei asked Niko and I to stay after school, because he wanted to talk about our old hokage friends. “Eiji, Niko,” Sarutobi Sensei said to us with a smile. “I never thought a day would come for me to see the descendants of Naruto Uzamaki, and Kakashi Hatake. Please just call me Hiroto Sartobi or Hiroto Sensei” “But Sensei, just because we are all descendants from the hokages doesn’t mean we can call you whatever you want.” Niko said “Yes Sarutobi Sensei even Master Jiraiya called the third hokage Sensei not his name, we should still call you Sensei, Sensei” I added to Niko’s comment. “Sorry Sensei, I have to be leaving. My father will be furious if I am not home before Sakura comes back from Softball practice.” I said to Sarutobi Sensei and Niko. “Let Me walk you home. Maybe I can meet your parents Eiji” Sensei replied. “Trust me, you don't want to meet my father” I said to Sarutobi Sensei running out the school doors.
27.09.2020 22:12
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Paragraph 19: I walked out of the school grounds and then I turned and looked across the street to find Ino looking out the window, but that wasn’t the Miyamoto’s house, and when I looked into her eyes they weren't hers, something was wrong. “Did you see Haruto Mori’s face when Sarutobi Sensei asked Eiji if he was a descendant of Naruto Uzamaki, the seventh hokage?” Miwaku Fuliwara asked Tenshi Fukuda. “His eyes went all wide and maybe looked like he had a sharingan” Tenshi replied. My body stopped, I felt as if I was frozen. “A sharingan?” I asked myself. “The only ones left that would have them are Sasuke and Sakura Uchiaha’s Descendants. Could he be?” I gasped. “Why were Ino’s eyes like that too when she looked at me?”
27.09.2020 22:14
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Paragraph 20: “Hey you, you must be Eiji Sato, a descendant of Naruto Uzumaki and Hinata Hyuga, aren’t you.” A man asked behind me. The strange man grabbed a knife from his cloak. “Eiji!” Niko yelled running behind the strange man pulling out her knife. “Run, run as far as you can. Get away from here.” “What’s the matter with you, young Sato? Why don’t you fight?” asked the man. “GET AWAY FROM HIM” Niko took the night to shove in his head, but he took his sword to block the attack. “Niko what are you doing?” I yelled to get her attention. “You have to get out of here, they are here for your chakra, your secret nine tails chakra” She yelled back to get me to run away. “You're a smart girl, we could use you on our team” the man said, blocking all of her attacks. “What, nin-” I gasped and wisphered “I have the Nine Tailed Fox in me!” “Yes and we must defeat Haruto Mori before he takes that spirit from you” Niko yelled ---
27.09.2020 22:14
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--- “I will go get my mother. She has a byakugan and she will be able to fight this man” I suggested. “Okay, then hurry up I can't hold this guy up for much longer” “ I will be back” I said as I ran as fast as I could to the Sato house.
27.09.2020 22:15
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Paragraph 21: “Mother! Mother! I need your help” I yelled so loud that the neighbors could probably hear me. “Eiji, What's wrong with you, you’re scaring the crap out of me?” My mother asked. “This girl, the descendant of Kakashi Hatake, is out trying to hold back a man from taking my chakra!” “You don’t mean the nine tailed fox's chakra do you?” “Mother I know now, tell me all about it after we defeat this strange man.” My mother and I raced close to the entrance of the school to find Niko still dodging the man's attacks and the man dodging Niko’s attacks.
27.09.2020 22:15
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Paragraph 22: “Byakugan!” My mother yells, activating her byakugan. “There I found you, your chakra points, prepare to die!” My mother yelled using a special chakra blocker. “64 palms!” My mother hits the center chakra point that lets the energy flow through the entire body. “8 palms”she pounded on his chest, but he blocked a few of them. “16 palms” she pounded again. “24 palms” his wrists broke out in blood but mom barey hit his chest where his most effective chakra point is. “32 palms” She yelled. “40 palms” I gasped as her chakra was going down and the man was not being affected. “48 palms” Niko gasped for air as she saw my mom trying to defeat the man. “56 palms” She was getting tired I could tell, we have never had to fight before. “64 palms” my mom hit his chakra point trying for the 64 palms. “That was for great uncle Neji, and why I did not get to see him. I hope that would have made him proud,” My mom said with such exhaustion. “Mrs. Sato!” Yelled Niko “You did well Niko you serve
27.09.2020 22:16
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--- “You did well Niko you served me well” “WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON!” I screamed at Niko and my mom.
27.09.2020 22:16
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Paragrph 23: “Oh, sorry Eiji” Apologized Niko, While she used a healing jutsu to heal my mom. “I have been wanting to tell you, but I am a healing ninja of the hidden mist and I have been serving your mother to try and become a Hidden Leaf chidori. I know ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu, and I will defeat Haruto Mori after I defeat this man” Niko said with great confidence.
27.09.2020 22:17
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Paragraph 24: “Niko pull off his mask and see who this evildoer really is” I demanded. Niko grabbed his neck and pulled off the mask. “Eiji” Niko dropped his head and frowned. “Lady Haneen Sato” looked toward my mom. “Child, Niko, what is it? Who is he?” “He’s,.... he’s…. he’s Master Takibi Sato” Niko sighed. “WHO!” I yelled looking at the man. “That’s father, he wanted to kill me?!” “Eiji,” I want you to understand something. I heard a groan and I thought it was my mother. “Mother, is something wrong? You are groaning a lot” I asked “I am fine Eiji, but that wasn’t me groaning” My mom says as she stands up. “No you don’t! You get back down onto the ground you jerk” Niko yelled slamming him to the floor.
27.09.2020 22:18
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Paragraph 25: “Well, well, well. I see you have met Mr.Sato, my best guard. Sakura you deal with Haneen” “Yes sir” Sakura obeyes.
27.09.2020 22:18
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Paragraph 26: “Byakugan” Sakura yells to start the fight between her and her mother. “You really think you can beat me Sakura? I was trained to be a ninja by your great grandmother Hinata. There is no way you can beat me.” “64 palms” Mom must have located Sakura’s chakra points if she is going to do the 64 palms on her. “HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Mom yelled hitting the 64 palms easily in her chakra point.
29.09.2020 02:48
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Paragraph 27: “Your mine,” Niko said Haruto. The only way I could help is the practice, rounding my chakra in the basketball to create an insane amount of force against my opponent. “Niko wait, just don’t let his attacks hit us” I yelled and grabbed 2 basketballs one to my mom and told her “chakra build some up inside the ball the push!” I started to build up chakra in my ball while I was running and now I had some much chakra surrounding it. I feel like the ball will pop in my hand. “Alright Niko do your best to try not to get hit, hold Haruto back by the neck” I told Niko to do. “On it Eiji” Niko replied as she did what she was told. “Eiji this act is called the Inside The Ball Rasengan, I am proud of you, for discovering this without barely practicing you truly do have some of the seventh hokage in you.” My mother said very proudly to me, I could just tell by the smile she was giving me.
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Paragraph 28: “Let's do this” Mother yelled. “Rasengan!” My mother and I both shouted and shoved the ball into Haruto’s sides. That was when we all looked at each other, then back at Haruto. “A substitution jutsu?!” we all yelled “Behind us” my mother said using her byakugan that can see a 360 degree angle and has x-ray vision. “Jump Niko, Jump Eiji!” “Yes”Niko and I both replied. “Rotation!” My mom rotates all around creating a force field of chakra, which if anything touches it gets repelled off of it right away. “Children, build up as much chakra as you can, and make as many clones as you can to destroy Haruto Mori” My mother sighed out of breath. “Multi Shadow clone jutsu!” My mom yelled as more than a hundred shadow clones appeared. “Multi Clone jutsu” I said as I focused on my chakra. “Water style, Water shadow clone jutsu” Niko said when she was by a lake to have water be created into Niko shadow clones.
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Paragraph 29: “You are going down! Eiji, Lady Haneen, and I are putting you back down to hell where you belong, Haruto, you're not even worthy enough for that name” “Who cares about that name, that name Haruto. It was given to me by my great grandfather, Old man Sasuke Uchiha. He told Grandma Sarada, to tell my mother, Hama Mori to name me Haruto in favor of Naruto, Old man seventh” Haruto muttered. “How dare you, how dare you talk about seventh hokage that way. You are Sasuke Uchiha’s great grandson, don’t use the name he gave you in vain. He didn’t want you to be like him” My mother sighed in pain. “ 8- trigrams, 64 palms!” My mom yelled, aiming at Haruto’s chakra point as he put on his hidden leaf village shinobi headband, and opened his eyes to a sharingan.
29.09.2020 02:51
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Paragraph 30: “You're not the only one with tricks up their sleeves.” Haruto smirked then yelled, “Mangekyō sharingan!” yelled Haruto as his eyes changed from stage three sharingan to the Mangekyō shargian. My mother ran forward but then as she looked into Haruto’s eyes, she was trapped in a genjutsu for 24 hours. Blood dripped down from her mouth. She screamed in fear and pain of the genjutsu. “Okay who’s next?” Haruto asked Niko and I as we looked at my mother on the ground in pain. Me seeing that must have triggered my nine tails fox chakra in me because the next thing I knew I was on all fours with long sharp nails with red beady eyes covered in a large amount of orange chakra. “MOM” I growled at Haruto. I created a shadow clone to help me create chakra in my hand for the rasengan. I made the shadow clone disappear when the rasengan was in my hand so that I could save up chakra. I ran in circles around Haruto getting ready to hit him with the rasengan. ---
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--- I turned to glance at Niko for just a second and I saw her build up lightning chakra, “she must be building up lightning chakra to form the chidori Hatake style” I thought as I continued to run. Then I saw Niko tun in the opposite direction of me but still around Haruto. “Now!” I yelled as I was jumping forward to hit Haruto, I saw her do the same. “Chidori!” I herd Niko scream at the same time I yelled, “Rasengan!”
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Paragraph 31: “Ah, how is this possible? I can’t move, I can’t dodge they're coming attacks” Haruto said as he looked down to find someone had used shadow possession jutsu to hold him still. Just before Niko and I hit Haruto with the rasengan and chidori the shadow possession was gone. There he was on the ground clothes torn on where the attacks were thrown, one on his left rib and the other on his back right shoulder. “That should be good,” Hokage Shikamaru said as the shadow possession came back to him. He looked at Niko, then me, then to my mom.
29.09.2020 02:52
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Paragraph 32: “Haneen. Aww man this is such a drag. Release” Shikamaru said, releasing the genjutsu off of my mother. She opened her eyes and looked up at the hokage, and hugged him. “Lord 10th” she looked in his eyes. She let go of him and stood up and looked at me and Niko. Lord 10th then looked at Haruto, with disturbing eyes. “Such a drag, Shadow possession Jutsu” Shikamaru said aiming for Haruto making him stand up. “Why do you want the nine tails? Who do you work for? What do you want from the Uzamaki and Sato clan?” Shikamaru hokage questioned him. Haruto didn’t say a word. “I will kill you here and now,” Shikamaru looked at my mom who was worried of death and looked at Niko who was liping “do it” then looked at me not sure of which.
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Paragraph 33: “Wait hokage! Just either do it or put him in prison” I yelled holding the rasengan about to kill the hokage if he would kill Haruto. “He has a purpose in life, Sasuke Uchiha did not name him Haruto for nothing so just do anything but kill him” I said still feeling the nine tails chakra in me. “Uh, what a drag. Fine Eiji, put the rasengan down, help your mother and get her and Niko out of here. I think you’ve earned this” said the hokage, giving me a hidden leaf shinobi headband. “You are now a hidden leaf shinobi, Congratulations you as well Niko '' he said, giving Niko a headband as well, and then went on his way carrying Haruto back to the hokage’s office.
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Paragraph 34: “You’re a Hidden leaf shinobi” ran through my mind over and over again. I will never forget this day. Right now who cares about my sister Sakura, or my father Takibi. They’re gone but Niko, my mother, Sarutobi Sensei, and Hokage Shikamaru are still here. We are all family, and I want to protect everybody. People I knew are now gone and are hurt. I must stop that from happening. I have to stop pain.
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Paragraph 35: “I am going to be Hinotama of Ninjas,” I said smiling, giving a thumbs up and smiling.
27.09.2020 02:25
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thx And everyone comment on this chain
30.09.2020 00:47
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Dang dude yes i think im late tho
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I finished the story and it was really good! I hope you get a A+ :) This is part from Naruto! haha mori clan
27.09.2020 05:11
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Woah there's more
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thanks blossomArt
27.09.2020 20:06
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*passes out*
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oof
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woah, thats great!
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