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12.01.2019
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12.01.2019 23:50
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Mk oof judge my old art oof
12.01.2019 23:53
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your art is cute, but lines clip through eachother or just stick out a lot. pay attention to your lines more, erase what sticks out. other than that p good my guy
13.01.2019 00:59
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Thank uwu
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i mean im not a professional or anything obviously, but yknow that doesn't mean my opinion doesn't matter don't call me a bully when i say i don't like your art, you asked me to criticize it and i did. it's your fault for commenting.
12.01.2019 23:51
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Mkay. I'm honestly utter trash rn so nothing will be a suprise
12.01.2019 23:55
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anatomy needs work. the first anim i could find that needs a lot of work is this. if the character's sitting in that kind of perspective, you shouldn't be able to see the thighs unless the leg is being held up. the hands are also a bit weird. the faces are a bit strange too, mainly because the eyes are so big that sometimes it looks like there's no forehead.
12.01.2019 23:57
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Thank you Honestly my art would be so much better if I had my chromebook
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Sure, although perferably judge what I've actually put effort into XD
12.01.2019 23:53
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Effort-
12.01.2019 23:53
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12.01.2019 23:54
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Character I guess-
12.01.2019 23:57
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pretty solid, but sometimes (especially when things are held) things are placed weird. like in your dragon queen anim, the crown is a bit weird. also in your character's ref thing, the hand is tilted to hold the cane which it shouldn't really do? oof
12.01.2019 23:58
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Good to know :)
12.01.2019 23:59
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now that I look at it that hand does look very odd
12.01.2019 23:51
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Judge away~
13.01.2019 00:03
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okay so the ears are drawn in a way that make it look like part of the skull, so it always looks like your characters have really pointy heads on the top. plus, there's like no expressions; there's smiling, slightly closed eyes, closed eyes and frown. that's basically it. the body is also placed really strange, a lot of times the shoulders are like 2x the length of the hips and it makes the arms look way too big. it's also pretty common that things don't look connected, or something just seems off. practice more with perspective and not just sticking to portrait and straight forward. also, all your art basically looks the same, especially with the same character; like tidepod, all of your anims with them are just blue, orange and white mashed together in slightly different ways to me.
13.01.2019 00:18
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Okay thank you i will try and work on that this feedback should help me get better again thanks! ^^
12.01.2019 23:53
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Kk I basically have a trashy artstyle so go ahead ;w;
13.01.2019 00:07
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try different perspectives other than just front. don't rely on circles too much, and make foreheads smaller/ put the eyes up higher. seriously that's like a 7head dude bodies are also placed weird. the arms are a bit too long, especially when they bend (elbows shouldn't be that close to the hip, if they relaxed their arm the hand should be a little lower than the waist, not down at the knees), and woah those tits stick out way too much. that's like hentai level of big boobs, it's just a ****ing giant oval on the chest. clam down there
13.01.2019 00:08
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;W;
12.01.2019 23:53
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Plox h8 on my bad art thx u
13.01.2019 00:09
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but it's not actually that bad! sometimes perspective and anatomy can be weird (like sometimes when characters open their mouth, the bottom jaw/ muzzle bends way too much to fit under "stylistic choice"), and the usual weird hands disease that nobody can escape, but other than that it's pretty solid.
12.01.2019 23:54
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me!!
13.01.2019 00:16
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your style's a bit inconsistent. like in this anim (http://flipanim.com/anim=CoBOR5Ha), everything's pretty proportionate other than that long ass neck, but in this (http://flipanim.com/anim=bQyWhqTA ) there's like nO forehead, the eyes are super high up and everything's way too spread out. typical weird hand syndrome (like in your pfp, the fingers are just blocks) but other than that p decent ;0
13.01.2019 00:22
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tanks (´꒳`) i'll try and be more consistent.
12.01.2019 23:54
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Cough put me in time out mommy
13.01.2019 00:19
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long neck b sometimes eyes can be places weird on the face, like parade in that anim where he's robbing some store. also i don't know why but human faces look really strange? oof also in that anim where parade's walking his hair looks like a pointy hard pp but other than that v good my son, you get a gold star
13.01.2019 00:27
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Oh thank you mother uwu I will make sure to improve
12.01.2019 23:55
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plz judge this ugly drawing i made XD
13.01.2019 00:22
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the lines shouldn't change between thick and thin, the coloring needs to stay within the lines, and the background should stay the background. arms don't bend like that, and you can't count it as stylistic because it doesn't fit with your style at all. make your eyes smaller or make your forehead bigger because there's literally no forehead there at all. the legs start too high too, and the tail is basically connected to the thigh, not the lower back.
12.01.2019 23:55
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k, let me unload them here
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this
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13.01.2019 00:24
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p smooth animation but the quick shakey thing (i don't know what to call it, but iconfreak does it too) bugs me a lot cough nice art tho *****lotus
13.01.2019 01:12
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*****olotus thanks for another nickname i like it
12.01.2019 23:56
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okay im putting the line here, i won't take any more
13.01.2019 00:02
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OOF >:C IM LATE
13.01.2019 00:27
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Dang it
13.01.2019 00:31
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Fiddle sticks
13.01.2019 00:50
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mega oof
15.01.2019 19:51
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hi yall won't see this but if u do I need some solid advice. other sites w/ my art https://toonator.com/user/little-fish https://drawn.digifi.ca/account
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