Hanahaki Alice || leak i guess
by:
KittytheWitch 
1887
1887
10.03.2018
5 comments
KittytheWitch[OP]
10.03.2018 13:43
LinkDisclaimer : I do not own the right to the Hanahaki Disease. This disease is usually used in Japanese culture. If you’d like to know more… then please do more research and more on it at the end of the story. also, if you see the name "Jane" that's just the draft version of alice, this story is not done yet so....DONT BLAME ME OK?
Alice was a nice, normal…girl. She seemed to be fine, yes. people make fun of her for her interests in anime and art but it didn’t bug her one bit, sometimes she seemed to act like a ghost when she did she didn’t interact with anything… people, objects or anything, really. When she acted normal she drew beautiful artwork, Talked to her friends and, was...happy. Soon Enough… she met “a new friend” named “Max” Now, Max didn’t take kindly to the bullying, he’d usually 1. He’d tell them to stop with a stern look or 2. He’d lash out at them, which happens often. You see, Max lost his little sister that he loves so dearly in a car accident.
KittytheWitch[OP]
10.03.2018 13:44
LinkEven though it happened a year before, he is still getting over it and lashes out at people who try to hurt the people that he cares for. Either it be physically or emotionally he will say or do something to stop it. Now, Enough about max and Alice…
“Max!” Alice's voice yelled in the distance, her voice was like the sweet tune of a violin. She ran over to max’s area on the hill for there picnic together. “Did you finish the manga I gave you?” max said hoping she likes it, for he knew what types of manga she likes. Which is ones that are slightly centered around a love triangle. “Nope! Not yet. But I do like it, so far!” “good! I knew you’d like it! Anyways, Alice. Should we eat?” Max said awaiting a response, yet he was too late. Alice was already scarfing down her sandwich and grapes. “Well, that gives me my answer.” he said as he picked up the orange juice and poured it into a glass.
KittytheWitch[OP]
10.03.2018 13:45
Link“So, How was your sandwich… cookie monster?” Max said. “Excuse me?” alice muffled trough sandwich which brought about a smile to max’s face. Why does she have to be this way? Max pondered in silence.
thats all i have for the story right now ;-w- give me some advice of what i should change and why. btw, this is just the start of the story, so no creepy parts... yet
carmax2016
10.03.2018 14:05
Linkthat is really good! and the boy i like his name is Max
