And who introduces themself after bumping in to someone tbh like that's just weird if I bumped into some random dude I'd just be like oops sorry then walk away not be like "hI IM MeL wANNA bE fREINDS sINCE wE BumPed intO EaChOTHER WICH MEANS WE ARE DESTINED TO BE ToGETHER DUE TO THE INCREDIBLE CLICHE AND NONSENSICAL PLOTLINE WERE STUCK IN :3 ?

Gosh that came out way longer then I thought it would be Oh shizzle and i accidentally said my name oh well

yOOUR HAND IS THE SIZE OF YOUR FACE IMAGINE CARRYING AROUND A GEMSTONE THE SIZE OF YOUR FACE ID SELL THAT THING ITD BE VALUABLE

yOOUR HAND IS THE SIZE OF YOUR FACE IMAGINE CARRYING AROUND A GEMSTONE THE SIZE OF YOUR FACE ID SELL THAT THING ITD BE VALUABLE

This whole thing has no logic meg u need to think more before making a series child

Also there's no setup to what's actually going on You need to do some world building in order to tell a good fantasy story Trust me in ym first fantasy I never worldbuilded and no one can understand what is going on aside from me and one of my friends

Exactly

By the way you don't have to exposition dump. You have to give them a bit of info yes but most importantly you have other know what's going on and translate that to the reader even if you want them to be in the characters shoes and cunfused Good writing tips website is Springhole.net it also has generators and rp tips