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Rewrite The Stars (By me)
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20.04.2021 08:05
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Rewrite the stars (A dear starboy fan sequel *With spoiler alerts-*) Chapter one; Dear Kittyboy: It had been a day since Tord had killed himself. Tom was devastated, but he honestly just wanted to join him. He told himself that Tord was in a better place now, over and over again, thinking of what to write in return for the boy he loved oh so much all this time. All he had written so far though, was just two words. Two simple words: 'Dear starboy'. The paper read out, the envelope having been Torn from Tom being so distraught. He slipped on his black leather jacket, the whole room just seeming dead and cold from not having any 'real' life in it.. Implying that Tom really didn't feel like living at this point, he really, really didn't. He had no will, and no motivation to live, so he didn't plan on it. Infact, he left his room for once, bringing nothing but himself, the letter he was writing to Tord, and a pencil. He walked and walked until he found blue tinted waters.
20.04.2021 08:06
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The same ones that Tord and Tom fell in love in, and... ..The same one Tord had passed away in. Tom was going to finish his letter, and be free, joining Tord. After all, he would be with the stars, in Tord's own words. He wrote the letter, with a pencil in rough strokes, since he had nothing now, and since he was stressed out, he was tense, and had a firm grip on the pencil. ...The star-patterned pencil that Tord had on his windowsill after he passed away. Tom had stolen it, just to keep it for himself.
20.04.2021 08:06
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And there was a note, it read this out loud in rough and thick writing:
20.04.2021 08:08
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""π™³πšŽπšŠπš› πšœπšπšŠπš›πš‹πš˜πš’. 𝙸 πš πš’πšœπš‘ 𝙸 πšŒπš˜πšžπš•πš πšπšŠπš”πšŽ πš‹πšŠπšŒπš” πš πš‘πšŠπš 𝙸 πšœπšŠπš’πš. 𝙸 πš›πšŽπšŠπš•πš•πš’, πš›πšŽπšŠπš•πš•πš’ πš πš’πšœπš‘ 𝙸 πšŒπš˜πšžπš•πš. π™΄πšŠπšŒπš‘ πš–πš˜πš–πšŽπš—πš 𝚠𝚎'πš›πšŽ πšŠπš™πšŠπš›πš πšŠπš—πš 𝙸 πš”πš—πš˜πš  𝚒𝚘𝚞'πš•πš• πš—πšŽπšŸπšŽπš› πš‹πšŽ πš’πš— πš–πš’ πšŠπš›πš–πšœ πšŠπšŒπš‘πšŽπšœ πš–πšŽ, πš’πš πšπšŽπšŠπš›πšœ πš–πš’ πš‘πšŽπšŠπš›πš πš’πš—πšπš˜ πšœπš‘πš›πšŽπšπšœ πšŠπš—πš πš’πš πšŠπš—πšπšŠπšπš˜πš—πš’πš£πšŽπšœ πš–πšŽ. 𝙸 πš πš’πšœπš‘ 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πš πšŽπš›πšŽ πš‘πšŽπš›πšŽ, πšŠπš—πš 𝙸 πš”πš—πš˜πš  𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽ πš–πšŽ πšŠπš—πš’πš–πš˜πš›πšŽ, πš‹πšžπš 𝙸'πš•πš• πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽ 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšπš˜πš›πšŽπšŸπšŽπš› πšŠπš—πš πšŠπš•πš πšŠπš’s."
20.04.2021 08:08
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"π™΄πšŸπšŽπš— πš πš‘πšŽπš— 𝙸 πšπš’πšŽ, πš πš‘πš’πšŒπš‘ πš πš’πš•πš• πš‹πšŽ πš˜πš—πš•πš’ 𝚊 𝚏𝚎𝚠 πšœπšŽπšŒπš˜πš—πšπšœ πšŠπšπšπšŽπš› 𝙸 πš πš›πš’πšπšŽ πšπš‘πš’πšœ. 𝙸'πš•πš• πš™πš•πšžπš–πš–πšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 𝚊 πš πšŠπšπšŽπš›πš’ πšπšŽπšŠπšπš‘ πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπšŠπš–πšŽ πšœπšπš›πšŽπšŠπš– 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšπš’πš, πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπšŠπš–πšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚒. 𝙸'πš•πš• πš‹πšŽ πš πš’πšπš‘ 𝚒𝚘𝚞. 𝙸'πš•πš• πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽ 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšπš˜πš›πšŽπšŸπšŽπš› πšŠπš—πš πšŠπš•πš πšŠπš’πšœ, πšŠπš—πš πš πš‘πšŽπš— 𝙸 𝚍𝚘 πš’πš, πš πš‘πšŽπš— 𝙸 πš”πš’πš•πš• πš–πš’πšœπšŽπš•πš, πš˜πšžπš› πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽ'𝚜 πš’πšπšŽπšŠ πš πš’πš•πš• πšœπšπš’πš•πš• πš‹πšŽ πš πš›πš’πšπšπšŽπš— πš πš’πšπš‘ πšπš‘πšŽ πšŠπš•πš’πšπš—πš–πšŽπš—πšπšœ 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπšπšŠπš›πšœ. π™°πš—πš, πš’πš— πš’πš˜πšžπš› πš πš˜πš›πšπšœ.. 𝙸'πš•πš• πš‹πšŽ πš πš’πšπš‘ πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπšπšŠπš›πšœ. 𝙸'πš•πš• πš‹πšŽ πš πš’πšπš‘ 𝚒𝚘𝚞. 𝙸 πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽ 𝚒𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚘, 𝚜𝚘, 𝚜𝚘 πš–πšžπšŒπš‘, πš–πš˜πš›πšŽ πšπš‘πšŠπš— πš πš˜πš›πšπšœ πšŒπšŠπš— πšŽπš‘πš™πš•πšŠπš’πš—, πšŠπš—πš 𝙸'πš•πš• πšπšŽπš•πš• 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšŽπšŸπšŽπš›πš’πšπš‘πš’πš—πš πš πš‘πšŽπš— 𝚠𝚎 πš–πšŽπšŽπš, πšŠπšπšπšŽπš› 𝙸 πšπš’πšŽ."
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20.04.2021 08:09
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~πšˆπš˜πšžπš›πšœ πšπš›πšžπš•πš’, π™Ίπš’πšπšπš’πš‹πš˜πš’." And Tom sighed, choking on his own words now. He put the note next to where he stood, tearing up. Well, this was the end. ...Or so he thought. He spread his arms out to form a 'T' with his broken body, leaning forwards and plummeting to his death into the stream, with a loud and big, great blue splash, bubbles and foam from the water rising to the top as he drowned and choked on the water, slowly losing air and conciousness. But.. The next thing he knew, he woke up in a white room... A hospital. (End of chapter 1-)
20.04.2021 08:14
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Tom yelped and jolted up, not knowing where he was for a few seconds. He heard faint yet loud arguing outside of his hospital room, though. ...And an oddly familiar voice leading the arguement. "No, you won't put MY boyfriend down!! Sure, he's been in a coma for a while, but please..!! Give him a chance..!! Don't pull the plug!!! ..Please.." A familliar norwegian voice protested, seeming like... Tord's..? Tord was alive?? Tom was alive?? Tom had no idea what was even going on at this point, eyes widening as he cupped his hands over his mouth in shock. He started sobbing, burying his face in his hands. He thought he lost Tord. He thought he lost his one and only boyfriend. What if this was also a dream?? What if this wasn't real?? ..Honestly Tom didn't know, but he sure as hell hated just being stuck in a hospital. And being misled. And the suffering his own father caused him in that stupid dream of his. Tom started to question his sanity, definitely confused, as a figure walked into the room, sobbing aswell.
20.04.2021 08:19
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The figure was a boy, wearing an off the shoulder shirt loosely speckled with stars, and underneath was just a black tank top. He had pretty blue floral jeans, and rings, bracelets, necklaces, and other types of jewelry all over, aswell as a light grey rose flower crown, loosely flopped over the boy's head, now leaning against his caramel brown and shiny hair, slicked into what looked like horns. He looked even more distraught than Tom though, definitely upset. "...Tord..?" Tom muttered, glancing up at the boy with his 'eyes' wide, definitely in awe. "K-Kittyboy..!!" Tord called back, sniffling as he pulled Tom into a warm and tight embrace. Tom chuckled slightly and hugged back, now content. "T-Thomas, never leave me like that again, please.. For me..?" Tord said, tears swiftly running down the commie's cheeks as he hugged Tom tightly. "Aww, it's okay Tord, where did I even go?" Tom asked, tilting his head because he was honestly confused. "O-Oh.. Well.." He started, glancing down.
20.04.2021 08:23
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"Y-You were in a coma be-because your father hit you in the-e head with a beer bottle after we were caught with the alcohol.. ..This is all my ****ing fault, I'm so sorry, K-Kittyboy.." Tord muttered, sniffling and sobbing even more as he buried his face in Tom's shoulder, arms wrapped around him. Tom froze up, sighing and rubbing Tord's back reassuringly. "Oh jeez.. ..Well he's a **** up, it's not your fault he's that way. It was my fault, alright..?" Tom said, smiling in an attempt to reassure Tord as best as he could. Tord giggled slightly and smiled in return, feeling a bit better now. "P-Pff a-awee, thanks.." He said, still smiling up at Tom. Tom chuckled and nodded as a little 'you're welcome', content.
20.04.2021 08:27
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And Tom stayed there to comfort Tord, asking him about what happened when he was gone. They took Tom's dad to jail for assault, and Tom got a new dad, since his mother had left the house when he was only a little child, and without the step-dad, he'd be an orphan if he weren't already. His name was Brad, and he was super nice. He bought a little lgbtq+ rainbow pride flag for Tom, for just no reason, he just wanted to be nice, and show that he was supportive of Tom and Tord. And they were never happier. They loved eachother so, so much, but one day, Tom came to the window to say something, tears running down his cheeks.
20.04.2021 08:32
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Tord froze up when he saw Tom crying, quickly trying to jump over to Tom's window, despite the fatal drop as he successfully landed onto the windowsill, pulling Tom onto his lap. "Aww, What's wrong?" He asked, rubbing Tom's back comfortingly. Tom sniffled and buried his face in the chest of the minty teal-ish sweater that Tord was wearing at the time, sobbing still. "I-I'm j-just.. ..Do you really love me..? Cmon please, tell me if this is a dream... I.. I'm begging you, T-Tord..." Tom mumbled, sniffling once more. "Of course I do, Tom!! I always will, and I always have. Please never forget that, alright..?" He asked, smiling reassuringly. Tom chuckled slightly and smiled back, now content. "Pfff- I-I love y-you too, Tord." Tom said in response, slightly giddy from Tord's affection.
20.04.2021 15:53
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Tord giggled and nuzzled the top of Tom's head with his chin, content. "Remember the bucket list we made?" Tord asked, chuckling. "Oh- Yeah, I do!! ..We already kinda finished it all if you count my coma nightmare thingy-" Tom said honestly, but Tord chuckled and shrugged. "Nah, it doesn't count. We still have to complete a bunch of them-" Tord said, arms wrapped around Tom. Tom paused, but he nodded, smiling. Tord suddenly pulled Tom's chin to Tord's and kissed him though, smiling brightly still. Tom froze up for a second, but he kissed back, chuckling. Tord soon pulled away though, keeping his bright and content smile, and Tom returned the same sort of smile, happy with Tord. A while later though, they went into Tord's house and Tord's room was filled with things patterned with stars, like usual. Tom and Tord were on Tord's bed, just snuggling now. Tord was in Tom's lap now and Tord had fallen asleep, clinging to the jehova's witness as he snored softly. Tom leaned his head on Tord's shoulder, content.
21.04.2021 08:16
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And a bit later,Tom picked Tord up, putting him on his bed and getting onto it with him, smiling slightly more as he cuddled up to Tord, pulling Tom's checkered blanket over the two. Tom soon fell asleep with Tord, snoring softly now.
20.04.2021 18:17
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L O N G
20.04.2021 18:53
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Longer than- Yeah I'll just stop my sentence here-
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