me after reading chapter 20 of
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Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 16:36
Linka garden across our collarbone by pittedpeaches... on ao3.. I HAVVEE so manythoughts whoo would like to hear them. your going to hear them. pulls out a chair
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 16:37
LinkAUGHHH AGHH uf UGHH eu HEU h ... AUEUGHHH ok passig period . tune in to this post in like 5 minutes
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:08
Linkok anyways UGH omg UGH ow.! LIKE IVE READ ALL THE CHAPTERS and ive usually had happy reactions like yay! omg! but when it comes to like angst scenes im like.. Ok.. uhuh.. BUT WOW this hit WOW i like i like. UGH
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:09
Linki literally like felt so g..h.. leaving that class (i was reading instead of doing ...work) and i thought about it like. all the way to my WERK! i was just. like.. oh..
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:17
LinkUGH ok im so conflicted on the dialogue i wanna say i can do better but i probbaly. couldnt..but like its a little .. it keeps jumping around!
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:18
LinkBUT ****KKK ****kk fu ****KK o
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:18
LinkIT MAKES ME SOOO sad........... i wanna crawl through my screen
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:20
Linki feel like pittedpeaches!mk could be writtn better.. some chapters Especially this one are good but there are some scenes that feel like. so Cartoonish which would make sense for a cartoon show.. but given that redson is given so much character depth itd make More sense for everyone else to also be written with just as much attention..
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:21
LinkTHIS MAKES ME WANT TO REREAD the whole thing but its 20 chapters and ongoing and like. 150,000+ words i think UGHHGG gg i think im gonna go crazy.
Schnappie[OP]
30.11.2023 17:21
LinkTHE END OFTHIS CHAPTER IS LIFE DESTROYING