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Critique my art/animation
29.07.2019
16 comments
Rosie2736
29.07.2019 19:31
LinkBut
I don't see anything wrong with it
Rosie2736
29.07.2019 19:32
LinkIt's amazing :D
(gonna use this to base my critiques on)
Art:
I really like your art style. It's unique. The only things i'd do to improve is pay more attention to anatomy (I know it's hard, i'm not great at it, but it helps)
You could also pay attention to clothing folds, and how material falls over objects. Maybe try using a colour other than black for the line art. I find that black is to harsh, but that could just be my opinion. Everything else is nice!
Animation:
Personally, I don't see anything wrong with your animation. It's smooth, it's realistic. All I could say is maybe make it less... stiff? I don't know I hardly do animation.
Overall, i'd give it a solid 7/10 ;0
work on hands and try to smooth ur lines and other then that ur art is amazingly perfect
ok
imma be honest 'ere
-it's kinda weird when you draw eyebrows/eyes on the hair
where's the logic?
i do that too but like
i don't do it because i want to
i'm too lazy to actually make art
- your eyes disappear because of shading
w h a t
your animations and the rest is good
