5/10
I like the filling and idea, but the crust looks off. the shading is light where is should be dark, and dark where it should be light. The shape also feels unreasonable. Crusts are usually flaky ya know?
6.5/10
the anatomy needs work. I know its the style, but the eye size throws the piece off. Also the shading seem wacky. It should be darker in some places rather then others instead of the same shade on the whole piece
1- 8/10
the face could have had more realistic shading, and details, but its pretty real looking!
2- 9/10
the anatomy is really good for the sketch, but the nose bothers me, how its drawn separate, like an eye? Combining the nose with the face rather then separating makes it look more real