Constructive criticism? c:
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QuinnBin[OP]
19.05.2020 18:58
LinkAny constructive criticism you guys have for me? You guys are such good artist, it would be nice to learn from you guys ^^
- the head is a little long/the hair is a little big
- hair naturally flows behind/over the ears, it's not usually tucked back like that
- the neck is a bit long
- cleaner lineart
Oo ok! Cleaner line art and try some line width variation! It's incredibly hard with line width on this site because theres no pen pressure.
And dont shade with a slightly darker colour of the original. It looks like you've done that (it's hard to tell on my phone screen lol) This video is very helpful! https://youtu.be/e-Zsgv993Os
Try changing the linear colour to a darker red (or whatever looks best)! It does make a big difference as black is a really bold colour.
I just thought I'll give a bit of insight! I love your art <3