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i gave the eye colour. opinion
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Thunder - meme-
i miss u Eli :(
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Number1-Padre[OP]
23.06.2020 04:59
Linktwo sides
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Number1-Padre[OP]
23.06.2020 04:59
Linkoh wait
before that note ur opinions, i made a special settings in the first few chapters and i wonder if u realized it or not
on the riley and ...pea? part it's kinda confusing
like i don't know who's speaking or acting and like uHh
why was she talking like a friend then like trying to shoot her or something
and the metaphors and descriptions are a bit awkward, i mean you're not a native speaker so well
and i think you should have described pix's appearence and where he was going more
don't try to μ§μ all of the text, look up idioms ig