4/10 sorry. I can't point out specific reasons cause I am not good at it but one tip is to make the nose a little different other than a dot. :)

hmm 5/10 the line art is a bit shaky and the other eye should be visible and if she has 1 eyebrow then she must have the other.right? but overall good character!

6/10 the anantomy isnt that great and u could fix the lines