Polaris
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Criticize my art
by:
SoccerPanda2647 
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20.10.2020
19 comments
SoccerPanda2647[OP]
20.10.2020 12:37
LinkWhat do you dislike about it?
What should I fix?
Also good morning :D I'm in advisory in the band room.
SoccerPanda2647[OP]
20.10.2020 12:43
Linkafk now I'm actually doing stuff
OKAY FIRST AND FOREMOST I LOVE YOUR ART-
However!
here are a few things that stick out to me?
I wish you shaded more and maybe made your backgrounds a bit more detailed?
Okay now just things I like!
I love your style
I eally like the way you draw eyes, they're super pretty
And ofc your noses are so cute!
Yes
I've been working on that a lot actually
I am really glad you told me this, though :D
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Anyways, what I mean is that, you kinda make the hair stick close to the scalp and forehead. I think you can work on that, by like, moving it outwards, adding some very small stringy bits. It gives the hair a messy but pretty vibe, and it fits the hair we have irl more.
And try shading more? And this may just be your style, but the arms are somewhat blocky-ish and a bit too long
Other then that, I love your artstyle :0
I try not to post wips too much
Sometimes I just would like to update you
But good to know! I am actually working on a lot of things you don't know about rn
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