Madison looked up at her mother with glassy eyes, like the hospital wires connecting to her veins. With a single smile, it brought her mother to tears. She embrased Madison in a warm, comforting hug. It felt like a pulsing fire in a fireplace. She could hear her mothers heartbeat, just like she did when she was little, which calmed Madison. Madison layed back in her warm bed, looking outside the window, one final time. It was a bright, colorful day. With one final breath, the light faded from her eyes. a lifeless child layed there now. once a wonderful, happy child... to just a corpse. please gimme advice, i wanna be a good writer.