I want criticism :)
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AddKim[OP]
24.03.2020 23:57
LinkI'd like to know what you don't like about my drawings, it could be the honest truth.
I want to improve it and so everything you write to me will be taken into account :D
Kawaiimarshmello17
25.03.2020 04:25
LinkIn my opinion there is nothing wrong! Its incredible
Kawaiimarshmello17
25.03.2020 04:28
LinkI no like ship tho >:3
AddKim[OP]
25.03.2020 07:25
Link😁
Kawaiimarshmello17
30.03.2020 18:55
Linkyou so talented at art! i swear you one of the best artist on this site! :0
Sayhelloworld
16.10.2020 23:59
Linkyes
PandasPeaceAndLove
09.03.2021 16:17
Linkhe is very good but what about Promagma and assiugirl.
PandasPeaceAndLove
09.03.2021 16:17
LinkAussigirl*
BAKUDEKUUUU
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BAKUDEKU IS MY LIFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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i mean it looks pretty good.. maybe add some shading to the hair.. or some more highlighting
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i don't really know what to criticize about this because its better than my art-
it looks amazing :O
You better be glad that I'm a multishipper. Everything looks pretty good, but maybe add a little more shading. Like, on the hair and stuff. I'm saying this, cuz I need to work on it too.
thank you for the yaoi 🙏
This entire speech isn't necessarily what I dislike, but what I suppose could help your progression, develop something?--idk.
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I think it's the details and preciseness of your art that's missing the love. You'd have to work to beat your current basics first, and after those little things, then types of shading/highlighting. It also seems like your rushing the art outcome instead of checking and trying to improve it.
Parts like the tips of the hair, the form of a line/outline that make the piece look more pleasing, pulling differences in different faces or physiques(e.g. tones, shaping, feature distancing, sizing, bulk, lengthening, imperfections, All of that and much more is qualified to make a single person separate from another in art[in even personality or appearance]. You'd also have to know the specific changes to make it look the way you want it to. You're almost there.) and textures which is another story.
The hair of both Deku and Bakugou look flat, which makes it vi
-sually unappealing. Your control of making lines--in this case, the outline, could use more experience. Keep practicing. The highlights in it are dull; I believe you'd know how to fix that.
There is so much variety here, and it's like you're squeezing it into something simple or enough probably so you don't need to risk it to try something else and make the art better when it already looks okay.
I like the colors you use for digital work. Unlike me, you've got an eye for that color correspondence. That's likely one of your good points.
Extra:
Art without its challenges and your growing effort won't get you far. Reaching new heights in a field will expand your view if you plan to observe and use it for action. Remember to observe and evaluate continuously. Sometimes figuring the things you create on your own is better because you know it best and it'll push out some borders.
I don't like this ship at all but the art is cute! <3 its very soft and adorable- pastel~ish. I love it!
(p.s. i ship tododeku and kiribaku)
Yesssssssss and my critizism is you draw to good1!1!1!!1!11!!!!1!!!1
I love Bakudeku and no one can tell me otherwise. (I respect other ships) (BESIDES THE WORST SHIP OF ALL WHICH IS... Deku x Eri :P) Amazing art!!
I 100% AGREEEEE @THENAT THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFULLLL THIS PICTURE MADE MY DAY I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHH T^T
