the flower looks like a certain AHEM thing

That's not how those shirts work... For all intents and purposes thats a boob window

Okay, then don't draw it to look like a boob window yeesh it's not that hard just looks a reference for once

She wasn't bossing you around, she was giving you a helpful tip.

Yeah, but it's gonna look like tits if you draw it that way and you obviously want it to read a cold shoulder shirt. It'll never read like that if you draw it like this, it'll always read like titty. What the frick is the issue with pointing that out. You can always draw whatever you want, but it wouldn't kill you to improve.

you seem like a young artist (im not assuming if your not then my mistake) and kids dont have that big of tits im just saying ._.

^^^ good example of what I'm saying They're trying to tell me that the boob window is actually a shirt with cutouts int he shoulders but it obviously doesn't read like that.