Trip's backstory. CHAPTER-1
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NSFWshit[OP]
27.09.2021 08:58
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NSFWshit[OP]
27.09.2021 09:08
LinkTRIGGER WARNING
There may be mentions of blood, voices, mental illness, suicide, and more.
Keep these in mind when reading
Please read at your own risk. (if it triggers you.)
NSFWshit[OP]
27.09.2021 09:08
LinkTrip was a.. Pretty happy child. He had small voices but when he told people they just said it's your inside voice. When you read something, you imagine a voice right? So he thought nothing of them. The voices.
Until one day they got so so bad..
"Angieeeeee come're!! I'mma get youuuuu!"
Trip says, chasing after his friend, Angelica.
"Nooo! Unfair! You have better shoes, tp! (Tee-Pee)" Angelic tries to run into the slide and climb up.
"Teacher! She's climbing the slide againnn!" a child says, snitching on Angelica. Climbing up the slide is a hazard.
"Trip.. Pull her out of the slide and get a rock.. Bash her head.. BASH IT- (V)"
Trip looks around, he asks. "w-who said that?!?!"
"We did..(V. V means Voices.)"
"Kill her.. KILL HER.. KILL.. HER. PUT HER OUT OF HER MISERY. DON'T YOU WANNA HELP HER? YOU SELFISH RAT! (V)"
Trip looks at the ground, he slowly picks up a rock. The voices were so loud.. Too loud.. He couldn't make them quiet.. Unless he did as they say..
"Come on trippp
NSFWshit[OP]
27.09.2021 09:11
Link---pp... Do it~..(V)"
"We're your friends.. Aren't we?.. Little.. Trippyyyyyy..(V)"
He pulls her leg, Angelica screams "LET GO! THAT HURTS!".
Then he keep pulling, she fall out of the slide. Right onto the Rocky, painful ground.
She gets scratches and bruises everywhere, and before he could bash her head.. He feels someone grab his arm.
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End. I hope you like it!
This was chapter 1.
Short made up story
Once upon a time a boy lived on a farm with his family peacefully until one day THE JAPANESE PLANES SHOT EVERYTHING AND THE ROARING ENGINES GOT LOUDER AND LOUDER EVERYONE PANICKED, THE BOY HID UNDER HOUSE WITH A KNIFE AND THE JAPANESE SOLDIERS RUSHED INTO THE HOUSE AND STABBED HIS PARENTS. The boy was scared but he had to do something so he sneaked behind one of they soldiers and slit the Japanese soldiers neck with his knife,he stole the rifle which had a bayonet at the end and then he heard machine gun noises and Chinese soldiers shouting so he ran fast to the Chinese soldiers but he was shot by a tank the end.
voices don't talk like that, they don't communicate with you, and they don't tell you how to hurt someone, they just say simple sentences like; "hurt them" or "kill them" when they're violent.
well at least, that's what they talk like to me.
overall, good story, i like it, but please do a lot of research, it will help readers understand and will better your story further.
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yeah, i always seem to really give off the wrong vibe whenever i give my thought on something :sob:
you're welcome for the criticism.