i need to make a story for ela and this is what i have so far is it as shitty as i think? Poisoned Bloodline Prologue The rain thundered down, masking the sound of little black paws hitting the earth. Scruffy was clutched in his mom’s jaws as his siblings ran ahead, he felt his heart thumping beneath his thick coat of fur. His eyes picked up the movement of bullets whizzing past his head, nearly missing his sister one of them embedded itself in a tree. The sound of thunder crackling mixed with the sounds of gunshots filling the night air with unbearable noise. The family of foxes bolted under and over fallen trees, pursued by a trio of armed men, each one shot blindly through the night, aiming in front of them where the foxes had just ran. Cocoa, Scruffy’s eldest sister disappeared into a hole, soon after six small animals were huddled in a small burrow, watching the rain hit the ground in huge drops...