The drawing it self is really good and the flowers stand out really nicely but it's just the size of pencil you used to draw the flowers kinda makes it look bad,,
Change the outline colour, like maybe a dark grey? Maybe red or something.
And use a thinner tool to draw the white flowers in the back.
But it still looks great :3
Alright, its really cute but im not a fan of the neon flowers, also that one arm is a big too big. Also try using a thin tool for the flowers. I like it tho :,)