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Bark Paws Mentor: There is no training today. You must go to Yellow Fang and collect a few herbs for Blue star. Bark Paw: Ok! *she raced out, down the ravine and into the clearing*

Bark Paw: *she Made Noise as she pushed her nose through the vines.* Hello?? Yellow Fang??

Bark Paw: *she pushed her way in, her tail high with importance* Im here for some herbs for Bluestar.

Bark Paw: Poppy seeds... She needs cobwebs... Juniper.. And things to deal with bites and scratches.. *she looked at Yellow Fang, worry glazing her eyes*

Bark Paw: I dont know how to apply them... and i dont think it can wait...

Bark Paw: Thank You Yellow Fang *she wanted to give the medecine cat a quick lick on the ear, But she just purred her thanks* She is just in her den. I'll Tell her you're coming.

Bark Paw: *she stopped at the fresh kill pile, picking up the biggest sparrow there then race to Blue stars den*

Bark Paw: *she looked at Yellowfang nervous and she slipped into blue stars den* Its just me and yellow fang blue star.

Bark Paw: *she dipped her head, Nodded at Yellow Fang and left* Bluestar: Hello Yellowfang.

Bluestar: *she ate the poppy seeds and put her head onto her paws*

Bluestar: *she purred her thanks, and gave yellow fangs shoulder a lick* *she seemed defeated and troubled *

Blue Star: Rouge cats. I went out by myself to think and i was attacked... *she put her head back onto her paws and added worriedly* I lost another life... It seems like they didn't know about the "nine Lives"

Blue Star: I will be.. I just need to let every cat know.. *she started to stand, her hurt leg against her body*

Blue star:*she dipped her head to yellow fang and limped towards the high rock, not bothering to climb it* *her eyes were dull* Cats of all Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the Highrock for a Clan meeting. *she yowled *

Bark Paw: *she emerged from the apprentices den and shuffled towards yellowfangs den* *she wasn't popular for her appearance* *especially because she looked like tiger star.*

Blue star: Rouge Cats are in Thunder Clan Territory and threaten us and our prey. I am ordering patrols to have atleast four cats and no apprentice leaves without a warrior.

Blue Star: DISMISSED *She disappeared into her den* *she had been there all day*

Bark Paw: *she saw something move just outside the gorse Tunnel* *she raced out of the tunnel* Mind: If i do this I'll be a warrior!

Bark Paw: *she stopped at the top of the ravine and she looked around* SHOW YOURSELF! *she yowled*

Rouges: *they emerged from the shadows, led by Tiger Star* Clever apprentice...

(ok)

Bark Paw:*she stiffened and lashed her tail* JUST WAIT TIL I GET MORE WARRIORS!

Bark Paw: Yellow Fang! *she ran to her, forgetting abbot the rouges only to get knocked onto the floor*

Bark Paw: No!I won't leave you to fight them on your own!!

BarkPaw: *she smiled at the praise then turned to the rogues*

Bark Paw: *she ducked under tiger stars claws and bit his front leg*

Bark Paw: *she was hit to the ground and pinned by another rouge* *she yowled*

Bark Paw:*leaps to her paws* Thank you yellow fang! *she looked around* *there were only Tiger Star and Dark Stripe left *

Bark Paw: *the claw marks on her side didn't hurt* *she gave yellow fang a thankful lick on the ear*

Dark Stripe: *he glared at her* Nothing to do with YOU old flea bag!! Tiger Star: *his tail lashed and he finally growled: You'll find out soon enough.

Tiger star: *he crouched and sprang,landing on yellow Fang* Bark Paw: *Rushes off to get warriors*

Tiger star:'*shakes himself then charges at her, being knocked off balance by Bark Paw who had launched herself into his side* *some warriors appear*

Bark Paw: *she raced over to her side and leaned on her to give her more balance* Are you ok Yellow Fang?? Im so sorry I didnt get the warriors here earlier...!

Bark Paw: *she raced to yellow fangs den and grabbed some cobwebs, yarrow and poppy seeds * here!

Bark paw: *she dropped them infront of yellow fang

Bark Paw: *she helped with the cobwebs and yarrow*

Bark Paw: *looks up at them* Ok!

Bark Paw:*races into Yellow Fangs den*