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Musical[OP]
04.01.2019 00:24
Link"I hope Starclan approves of my choice of who will become the new deputy. The new deputy of Sunclan will be Windstorm. His efforts to keep the clan safe is easy to see." Cherrystar said loudly. She nodded her head towards Windstorm who was feeling proud of himself. He had finally become deputy! He padded past Raystorm and towards Cherrystar. He smiled at her.
"Thank you for choosing me Cherrystar." He sat down beside her, his tail flicking about. Cherrystar watched the clan cats go back to there duties and then looked at Windstorm.
"You truly deserve it. Anyway ask Raystorm if she would like to sort out the patrols. I need to speak to you."
Windstorm nodded and walked towards Raystorm.
Raystorm frowned, thinking she was in trouble when Windstorm came near. Windstorm could feel her eyes, digging into him.
"Cherrystar wanted you to sort out the patrols. If you could can you sort out a hunting patrol? Don't send to much cats out in case any clans attack." He said.
Musical[OP]
04.01.2019 00:24
Link Luckily Raystorm looked more calm and happy to be trusted by Cherrystar.
"Yes Windstorm. I'll do that right now." Raystorm quickly sprinted towards the warrior dens before Windstorm could say anything else.
Windstorm sighed and walked to the leader's den. Cherrystar was there her body tensing up like she was nervous. Obviously she hadn't notice Windstorm enter.
"Cherrystar? Raystorm is sorting out the patrols and the hunting patrols."
Cherrystar stared at Windstorm and then sighed. She sat up and padded her tail, telling him to sit down. Windstorm obeyed and sat down beside her.