Ill rate your oc designs
54 comments
peridotuniverse
14.02.2018 01:51
Linkok :>
peridotuniverse
14.02.2018 01:52
Link:P
Lilli-Cat[OP]
14.02.2018 01:54
LinkColor choice: 9/10 the color scheme is easy to look at
originality: 2/10 it kinda looks like mangle.
Backstory: N/A there isnt one
Design: 7/10 its pretty good but the outfit is kinda plain and simple.
Personality: N/A no bio
peridotuniverse
14.02.2018 02:02
LinkWell I can see you why you would say it looks like mangle and mangle and my oc are alike dew to the fact that my Oc is Funtime foxy. In the Fnaf series theres Mangle and Funtime foxy they look alike dew to the fact that Funtime foxy in a newer version of mangle witch my Oc is Funtime foxy but I can tell you now you rate this very well.
peridotuniverse
14.02.2018 02:04
Linkand at the moment I am making a Oc that is VERY ORIGINAL
color choice: 10/10 the colors go well together and the yellow gives it a slight pop with all the grays
originality: 9/10 pretty good character but also kinda plain nothing really stands out too much
backstory: none given
design: 10/10 pretty good outfit choice.
personality: 8/9 personality is visible through the character design and is portrayed very well
Mary
Colors: 10/10 Pretty simple color scheme that stays the same throughout entirety of the character
Originality: 9/10 outfit is pretty original and so are the wings but other than that it kinda doesnt stand out too much
backstory: none given
design: 10/10 love the outfit.
personality: none shown clearly
Angel
Color choice: 10/10 pretty and consistent throughout entirety of design
Originality: 9/10 Really original love the hair.
backstory: None given
design: 8/10 nice love the hair and the outfit kinda similar to mary's
personality: not clearly shown
colors: 9/10 pretty good but for the fur maybe do just a slightly lighter shade it stands out a bit to much
Originality: 7/10 pretty good but kinda basic.
backstory: none given
design: 7/10 pretty basic "mysterious character" outfit
Personality: 7/10 kinda basic and bland. the shy doesnt fit in much with the rest of the personality.
tips: When making a character ask why about everything. "why does it have this why does it not like this why does he act like this why does this fit with that"
Colors: 7/10 its pretty good but the blue and the purple are kinda too bright. also the white leggings pop out too much. Make them a darker grey.
originality: 9/10 pretty good. love the multiple eyes.
design: its okay, the wings and tail and horns are a bit too much maybe take away one of them or make them less stand outish
personality:not shown clearly throughout pose or design.
colors: 7/10 meh they are ok. the pinkish purple doesnt go well with the blue. make it a little more pale or more purple. also the orange eye id suggest make it a little more yellow or brown. one of the two.
originality: 7/10 the spots on the eyes are pretty original but besides that they are just anthropromorphic cats try and add things to make them stand out more like outfit wise
design: 6/10 they are almost wearing the same thing but in different colors. try giving them differing outfits.
personality: not shown.
colors: 9/10 pretty good but the eyes are a little too neon id suggest making them a bit lighter or leaning more to the grey with the rest of the design being brown and grey
originality: 10/10 pretty good the scar isnt very common on flipanim ocs the dots make it stand out a little and not just look like the average brown cat with clothes.
design: 7/10 the clothes are kinda simple but the dots on the chin kinda make it look like he has a beard which is kinda cool.
colors: 6/10 kinda strange together id suggest making the orange a bit more pastel looking since the dress is pastel pink
originality: 10/10 its a tiger with a flame tale and it looks really cool. the fluffy tail makes it stand out
design: 7/10 the dress is pretty original and the hair is pretty and floofy
colors: 10/10 simple and look like the animals that are a part of the chimera
originality 9/10 pretty good dont have much criticism for it.
backstory: meh its ok the eating through the bars is kinda weird. maybe if it were a different escape route? i feel whoever was caring for them would have noticed them escaping the way they did
design: 9/10 its pretty good but instead of doing that with the legs id suggest the bird legs both in back and the goat both in front. i dont know if that is different with all of them or if its all the same so i dont know.