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13.08.2020
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i'll do up to three art pieces/ocs it'll be out of 10, 0 being the worst i've ever seen 10 being the best i've ever seen I may also choose to critique alongside my rating, however you can request criticism to be given or not
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I have beanan He has too many names
13.08.2020 21:55
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And I have the gangggggggg
13.08.2020 21:56
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4/10 dude seems pretty average, only thing i'm not super fond of is the neon purple for the shirt. I'd recommend making it a muted color as well, or a pastel. it'll look much nicer on em and not distract the viewer's eyes
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13.08.2020 21:58
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for the second- 4/10 the linework is a bit messy, not a huge huge fan of the big eyes, and the background colors being the same as the shirts (minus the dude on the right) causes some clarity to be lost. It's harder to make out the characters
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Do we have to attach..?
13.08.2020 21:53
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yesm, but i'll also take ibb and imgur links if it's offsite
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13.08.2020 22:02
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7/10 Coloring and shading is definitely something you excel at- however, some of the anatomy in the head is a bit jarring. The eyes also seem a bit too far apart, and don't tilt with the head correctly
13.08.2020 22:03
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Ah,, thanks you :D
13.08.2020 22:46
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ofc! ^^
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Note: mornibgs i animate on pc others on mobil
13.08.2020 22:08
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Design: 6/10 wings are too small to be functional- and the neon blue could be desaturated a bit and moved slightly more towards a purple for a design that flows better. other than that, it's pretty average imo Animation: 7/10 man you are awesome at tweening- however, to me there's too much going on. the background changing; the character moving pretty fast- I had to watch it a few times to understand what I was looking at. it might also be a good idea to do a technique called slow in and slow out. basically it means an object moves slowly at first- then speeds its movement- then slows down a hare at the end to let the viewer process the movements
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3 and 4 are by me
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Please critique! I love honest feedback.
13.08.2020 22:14
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6/10 The character is sort of average, using most of the default colors and not yet having a recognizable trait about them. To fix that, you could give her a set accessory or add a couple of colors to her palette. as a drawing, you seem to have a good grasp on arm and leg anatomy. something to improve upon could be the head anatomy, and shading
13.08.2020 22:20
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I KNEW she should have a sword
13.08.2020 22:46
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sword time!
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ayye hold on
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these guys?
13.08.2020 22:19
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8/10 I like the way the clothing also tells something about the character's personality- and not just their expression. Though, the jacket on the character on the left I feel would look better as another color, or darkened/desaturated slightly. I may also recommend adding more contrast to them all using different values. something that can help you see if your values are in check is grayscaling the image in another program- or grayscaling the palette
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uhh okay
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here you go
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mm i was wondering if you could rate the animation?
13.08.2020 21:58
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oh by the way, i would like you to criticize by art, not oc if that's okay with you
13.08.2020 22:32
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Yea man, sure thing! For the art: 8/10 colors and shading colors work super well and definitely go with the mood of the piece! this is moreso personal preference, but I think the linework could have some variation in width or remain consistent in the width. the teeth look a bit jarring because you have the big stark lines for the outer mouth but the skinny lines for them. Also, the clouds being outlined doesn't really flow well with the background- while it does add clarity it makes them feel a bit off putting as the rest of the background isn't outlined. A way to maybe pull off outlining the clouds would to use a lighter gray close to the color of the clouds. For the Animation: 7/10 the animation itself isn't bad, but everything's a bit fast paced. I've never heard the song so if the song is rather fast paced like that then it'd be alright when put with the music. I also notice that there isn't any use of apprehension- the character moves into the action super abruptly.
13.08.2020 22:36
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ah yeah for the second animation, it was extremely laggy so it was kinda hard to tell whether it was too fast but thanks for the tips!
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ofc dude! hope it helps ^^
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Ok um hang on e
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Oc I made
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Other oc I made
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13.08.2020 22:38
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Emil: 7/10 Emil is simple, but Iconic. I've always felt like the purple jacket was a bit off-putting though, as there isn't any other purple in the design other than their tongue. I think the design flows much better when you gave her the nb colored jacket- because the yellow on her cheeks ties in to that as well
13.08.2020 22:41
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Lime (I think that was their name?): 8/10 Simple but super Iconic like Emil. There's not a whole lot I can say on them really- the design is pretty good
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Art: 6/10 It's pretty average- it could use some shading and some more detail, but everything reads extremely clearly. You can definitely tell who's the main focus, and the words and other people (sorry I severely lack in FNAF lore lmaoo-) aren't too distracting. + colors work nicely
13.08.2020 23:01
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13.08.2020 23:13
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Yw dude ^^
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thats all
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1st as design: 8/10 simplistic but not overly simplistic- only thing I'd change really is the brown. I'd make it darker so the purple and skull pop more. As art: 6/10 It'd be nice to have something other than a solid background- and the shiny bits on the fur don't make much sense to me
13.08.2020 22:52
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Rings: 8/10 love the palette on this dude! the patterns aren't too complex either, and the rings not overused.
13.08.2020 22:59
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^^ thanks!
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'course my guy!
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i know the anatomy is a bit messed up and is a bit complex but too lazy to change her lol
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https://ibb.co/0ZzTy08 uncolored new oc
13.08.2020 22:05
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these 2 are ocs, cause well- I can't art lol
13.08.2020 22:59
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yea man hoo boy they're complex Subject-0011: 8/10 colors work pretty well surprisingly- but yeah way too complex. The face looses some clarity because of this The uncolored dude: 7/10 I can appreciate the originality here, but the wing anatomy makes no sense at all. not much else I can say until they're colored
14.08.2020 00:12
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Wing anatomy is supposed to be a bit ah, weird due to a mutation and all that I updated her ref already, still have not added color, but wings are used for gliding, not flying
14.08.2020 00:14
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"ref" Lol I really need to color her
13.08.2020 22:32
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You already know mine
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wee woo i'll critique this one hrr 6/10 could use some shading- and a complementary color for the background. maybe make like half a neck so the anatomy makes more sense? it's pretty average tho, other than that
13.08.2020 22:44
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Okay!
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fursona https://toyhou.se/7440244.liko
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Art: 7/10 The ear placement for the one in the back doesn't really make any sense- and the hind leg looks super short- it wouldn't make sense when they stood. shading could be a bit more defined- especially in the face- and you need to think of where your light source is. Fursona/Liko: 8/10 like I said with someone previous, I can appreciate the originality here. they're simple, but iconic.
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oh okay, thanks for the tips!
13.08.2020 23:13
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ofc! hope they'll help dude c:
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