Shelly! <3
17 comments
Lidercider
09.06.2019 10:16
Linkshe dummy thicc
ShellyBaldisGF[OP]
09.06.2019 10:18
Linkthank you! she works out with the PE teacher!!!
her personality
-depression
-secretly a rainbow neko
-she hates kids >:(
-shes also a secret angel and hides her wings
- big boobs!
I would like to do a little critique on your oc, this isn't meaning to offend you, just wanna help you improve! :>
1. Try and work on the lines being less sketchy
2. Use the editor and make two layers, sketch on one.
3. I'd work on hands a bit
Now for your oc :>
1. Your oc in general, (again reminding you this isnt meant to offend you) is basically a mary sue. I would change somethings or create a backstory, such as how did she become depressed, oh and a rainbow neko and an angel at the same time is kinda... Cliche.
2. Just saying. A chest that large is probably going to hurt, or make awkward momemts or be difficult for her to relax or do other things.
Just saying, I have nothing against your oc, at all, I don't want drama okay. I have a question though, why does your oc always have to wear revealing outfits? Idk just wondering.
I hope you'll take this into consideration!