Criticism is good to give out, but constructive criticism is better. Yeah, I could tell that it needs work but it's still good for someone who is 11. That's my opinion though. The only opinion that a person needs is their own, and so nobody else's opinion matters. Anyway, back to criticism. Constructive criticism is like someone saying "Hey this is what needs to be worked on, and this is what I think is pretty good." So what needs to be worked on is the lining (the outline). It's sorta messy and some things go through each other. The girl with pink hair is supposed to have 1 eye and the other eye is replaced with floating flowers. But I can see why you didn't draw that. What I really liked though was the art style, so you did a good job with that. Overall, the project looks pretty good for someone your age, so don't feel beaten down or anything. :)