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23.10.2019
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23.10.2019 11:34
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23.10.2019 11:34
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1) Autumn Air I breathe in, the oxygen filling my lungs, Nourishing my body with its sweet scent Cramming its way into every vessel I wait, looking up at the sky I allow the oxygen to flitter through my body Now carbon dioxide, it floats through me, Begging to be let out But I wait, savoring the bits and pieces The smell of dying leaves and browned grass I listen to the pitter-patter of red squirrels, Playing in the grass, preparing for winter I feel the coarse plants under my hands, Small thorns waiting to grow My lungs are pleading, begging me Let go, they beg And I do Welcome back, autumn air
23.10.2019 11:34
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2) I whisper and you whisper back Not as loud, but just enough to be heard My footsteps repeat, over and over Beyond my control, they follow me I yell and you yell back Repetitive noise, nothing new Heard by everyone If only it was so for me But I remain Unheard
23.10.2019 11:35
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3) T-R-U-S-T Blackness surrounds Seeing without seeing Trust T-R-U-S-T Trust is what it takes We must let go of fear Trust yourself I walk, no vision Unknown I turn a corner Trust I start to run, and fall I open my eyes There stands a brick wall There is a fine line Between trust and foolishness You know which one to choose
23.10.2019 11:35
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(Okay, which one should I submit for my poetry contest?)
23.10.2019 11:36
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[(Btw the second one is called "Unheard")]
23.10.2019 11:36
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1 for sure
23.10.2019 11:37
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but there all great
23.10.2019 11:41
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I was planning to use one. Thanks!
23.10.2019 11:38
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1 or 3
23.10.2019 11:42
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Okay! Thanks
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