I need your opinions

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Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:34
LinkLet me type
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:34
Link1) Autumn Air
I breathe in, the oxygen filling my lungs,
Nourishing my body with its sweet scent
Cramming its way into every vessel
I wait, looking up at the sky
I allow the oxygen to flitter through my body
Now carbon dioxide, it floats through me,
Begging to be let out
But I wait, savoring the bits and pieces
The smell of dying leaves and browned grass
I listen to the pitter-patter of red squirrels,
Playing in the grass, preparing for winter
I feel the coarse plants under my hands,
Small thorns waiting to grow
My lungs are pleading, begging me
Let go, they beg
And I do
Welcome back, autumn air
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:34
Link2) I whisper and you whisper back
Not as loud, but just enough to be heard
My footsteps repeat, over and over
Beyond my control, they follow me
I yell and you yell back
Repetitive noise, nothing new
Heard by everyone
If only it was so for me
But I remain
Unheard
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:35
Link3) T-R-U-S-T
Blackness surrounds
Seeing without seeing
Trust
T-R-U-S-T
Trust is what it takes
We must let go of fear
Trust yourself
I walk, no vision
Unknown
I turn a corner
Trust
I start to run, and fall
I open my eyes
There stands a brick wall
There is a fine line
Between trust and foolishness
You know which one to choose
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:35
Link(Okay, which one should I submit for my poetry contest?)
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
23.10.2019 11:36
Link[(Btw the second one is called "Unheard")]