Okay so you added the shirt so I say don't make it look like the shirt and trousers are connected draw a horizontal line on the waist to separate them and colour them different colours. Also the pp is hanging out too much which makes mira look like a guy- and the butt isn't in proportion with the back and leg. It should curve out and curve back down by the leg,not stay up. Also it makes Mira look rlly thin