I will rate your art
by:
GoldenRose 
262
262
04.08.2019
32 comments
GoldenRose[OP]
04.08.2019 20:19
LinkAttach your best drawing/ animation and I will rate/ critique your art!
Oop and I will be honest
Theres this one too, i am aware the background is bad im going to fix it but I would like some other ideas and opinions on it!
On the first one,8/10 the art is very nice! It just seems a bit messy
On the second one,7.5/10 I don't think the background is bad at all,but the shading is a bit all over the place and distracting. And I can see alot of places where the coloring went out of the lines
thanks on the first one!
And the second one thanks as well! I will be fixing it and Ill look into it! :D
7.5/10 the lineart is very thicc, and I see what you where trying to do with the hair but it just looks like scribbles
ugh
theres a little gray part on the strawberry that is ticking me off
GO AWAY GRAY LINE
On the first one, 8/10 it's kinda overshaded,and the shading isn't like lines, gradually getting darker, and just random lines. Also it looks better if you make the shading colors more red, or blue, ect. Just a tip
On the second one, 9/10 definitely looks like a strawberry, but it's a bit overshaded.
HHH
I STRUGGLE SO MUCH WITH OVERSHADING!
IT'S LIKE
UGUUGUGUUG
HOLD ON, IMMA SHOW YOU SOMETHING FROM A YEAR AGO.
8/10 can't really give critique?? Just improve uwu (not that it's bad it's just I can't really point anything out???)
