GUYS I NEED HELP POEM HELP NOW
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aj-animates1 
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08.02.2023
25 comments
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:15
LinkI can help
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:16
Linkdo you know how to do a Limerick?
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:16
LinkI think so would you like my help though
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:18
Linkyes very much, i was asking this question to make sure
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:18
LinkUm do you have a theme for it yet?
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:21
Linki mean i uhm- does this Limerick i wrote have a theme? me not have good grammar me stink at wording together.
There once was a little boy named Joe.
Who had met a new friend, a young Doe
The Doe ate bugs and sticks,
The boy played with toy bricks.
The boy ran home, so did the young Doe.
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:21
LinkUh yeah it's pretty good and simple I like it
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:23
Linkcritics pls :D
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:26
LinkOh ok
It's very simple yes but I feel you could rhyme other words rather than ending words to give it more of a rhythm and flow like
The doe ate bugs and sticks
And joe played with bricks
Instead of having just to blunt sentences
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:32
Linktysm that fits really well :)
anything else?
toxic-timez
08.02.2023 21:33
LinkNah you did a good job all around
aj-animates1[OP]
08.02.2023 21:36
Linktyty! this really helped :) ttehehehe
not now since homework and other things
i'm sorry if it feels like i'm avoiding you ;-;
There was an old man with a beard,
Who said, "It is just as I feared-!
Two owls and a hen, four larks and a wren,
Have all built their nests in my beard!"