I like the colors and the composition, but the lineart is a little messy and some shading would be nice. Overall a fairly nice piece.

It is very visually appealing in the color scheme, and you have very nice lineart. The only thing that bothers me is that there is a lot happening and it is very busy. Maybe tone down some of the elements so it is easier to tell what you are trying to show? I really like it though.

Np!

I like the black outline and the general idea of the piece, but some parts just aren't making a lot of sense for me... First of all what is the yellow shape on the right? Also your lineart should usually be darker than your darkest color, and if you are trying to convey a more cheerful happy vibe, warmer colors work better. It is pretty good, but could use a bit of work.

Np! Good luck ^^

Ok so first off... this is really cool, but I am going to abuse it anyways. The hair has really nice texture, but try looking up refs for hair next time so you can see how it works. The anatomy is a bit off, just in the fact that I am not sure that normal necks work like that... but I like the flowers. It is a nice piece overall.

Np! I hope that helps..

I'm sorry but there is no way I would have the patience to draw something like this, so I don't feel comfortable being mean to it... good job!

Ok!

It is a cool character and I like the multicolored lineart, put it is a little messy. If you zoom in you can smooth out the lines and get a more professional look.

*but

Oh ok! Yea it is hard to avoid that when you use mouse...

Wait I might be able to help tho... what type of device do you draw with?

If you draw with a computer I know of a extremely cheap drawing tablet on Amazon!

https://www.amazon.com/Ultrathin-Graphic-Digital-Drawing-Pressure/dp/B01BA6XQI0/ref=asc_df_B01BA6XQI0/?tag=hyprod-20&linkCode=df0&hvadid=309707619534&hvpos=&hvnetw=g&hvrand=16225901403540384812&hvpone=&hvptwo=&hvqmt=&hvdev=c&hvdvcmdl=&hvlocint=&hvlocphy=9014783&hvtargid=pla-526184912555&psc=1

Oh ok! Congrats ^^