uh-rate this? 1/10
9 comments
Infimoose
01.08.2020 09:56
Link8-10, The background and shading's really good
Gray77[OP]
01.08.2020 09:57
Linkty uvu
oc- painfully bland. No designs, no cool concepts, literally just the default colors. Its probably either a cat or dog im guessing
Shading- I can see you tried but honestly it looks like you did it last second in an attempt to make it look like you put more effort in.
Lighting- there's no lighting here. Lighting is just as important as shading.
Lineart- although its confident its not very appealing for some reason. Might be because you picked the same color lineart for the background.
Background- I get trying to make a simple background but like. Its not aesthetic. Its just green and black which doesn't match or compliment the oc at all.
Overall- 6/10, better than a good portion of people but still needs work
gonna nitpick the shading-
so uhh
get prepared for full bluntness
i can barely see the shading and i can tell your either colour picked the colours and made it darker or used black to shade
! NEVER USE A DARKER VERSION OF THE ORIGINAL COLOUR OR USE ANY GREYSCALE COLOUR TO SHADE !
It just looks bad and muddy and gross. I always use blue and yellow for simple shading and lighting, or any other non-greyscale colour to do ~fancy shading~ (Like with red or pink). Also, please try to make it more visible. It doesn't hurt to try out new shading styles!
*you
It's more appealing to the eye if the shading is more visible.
What do I mean?
well pretty self explanatory
I used to shade on just one side of the body for simple shading (still do because im lazy)
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