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fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:40
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1: <setting: leader's den>
"I'm a good pretender-- won't you come see my show?"
I got this one! uwu
2: <setting: leader's den>
"I got lots of problems, good thing nobody knows"
Nightstar starts to lipsync this, & then coughs, and glances at a small pile of herbs then looks up facing the exit to his den at "nobody knows"
3: <setting: Medicine cat den>
"Oh I'm insecure, I'm insecure"
Nightstar and Runningnose are alone in the medicine cat den-- Nightstar coughs in the space before the lyrics start, & then sings these lyrics to Runningnose
4: <setting: medicine cat den>
"I think I lack what I'm suppose to, lack what I'm suppo-o-ose to"
Nightstar is singing to Runningnose-- try to emphasize his faded star here cuz this is like,, him singing about how he doesn't have nine lives owo (if you could do some effect involving nine stars showing up & then dissapearing at the last "suppo-o-ose to" that would be epic aaa!)
fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:41
Link5: <setting: moonstone>
"I'm a good pretender, I'm not really cool"
Nightpelt and Runningnose are at the moonstone. //MAKE SURE NIGHTPELT HAS NO STAR AT ALL ON HIS HEAD// They touch their noses to it and are transported to starclan-- Only to see a single starclan cat, who shakes its head and abruptly pushes them back into the real world. Nightstar and Runningnose look at eachother, utterly bewildered
//transition to transparent background would be epic at the end here!!//
6: <setting: main camp>
Nightstar and Runningnose have just returned from the moonstone & are standing on top of the highrock above the clan awaiting below. Nightstar looks unsure (perhaps glancing at his faded star?) Runningnose nods at him encouragingly & Nightstar looks out at the clan with a bit of renewed confidence. If you have more time, show Nightstar naming Cinderfur his deputy.
fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:42
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7: <setting: fourtrees at a gathering>
"I do not belong here, you all clearly do"
Nightstar stands on the great rock with Bluestar, Tallstar and Crookedstar, who have very crisp, unfaded stars on their foreheads. Perhaps Nightstar is a bit hunched over
8: <setting: fourtrees at a gathering>
"But I'm a good pretender, so I'm just like..."
Nightstar's turn comes to address the clan, and he begins to feel more confident in his leadership abilities. mmm perhps at the end have him glare at the stars in the sky like "HA! see that starclan??? I dont need nine lives to be a good leader mWAHAhaH"
//Transition to transparent background aaaaa <33//
9: <setting: main camp>
[instrumental]
Nightstar watches a coughing sickness overtake his clan in horror-- make it seem like everyone in the clan is just barely livingg. At the very end have Cinderfur die before his eyes
fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:42
Link10: <setting: main camp>
"I'm a good pret-e-e-ender"
Nightstar sings tthis in fear over Cinderfurs body-- a tear(s) falling down his face. If you could portray a sense of Nightstar feeling that the sickness is all his fault for lying to his clanmates about his lives, that'd be neat!
ohyee and at the end have Tigerclaw, Blackfoot & Clawface walk into the camp (with slightly smug expressions on their face mayb..?) holding prey.
11: <setting: main camp>
"I'm just like you, do you like me too?"
Tigerclaw sings/portrays this cordially to the starving, sickly clan, him Blackfoot & Clawface look strong and powerful compared to the rest of the cats. The last remark is addressed to Nightstar, who looks at the two thoughtfully.
fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:43
Link12: <setting: Nightstar's den>
I'm just like you, do you like me too?" Now I'm just like you, I'm a good pretender"
Nightstar and Tigerclaw are in Nightstar's den, Nightstar clearly dying. Nightstar rubs the faded star off of his head and looks up at Tigerclaw with hope in his eyes-- Nightstar truly believes Tigerclaw will make a good leader for Shadowclan. Tigerstar looks breifly shocked, and then grins evilly and whispers "I'm a good pretender"
fuzzyclaw[OP]
17.09.2020 21:45
Linkhere is a different kind of this map and the song
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/382210334/