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REAL SCIENCE (part 3)
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04.04.2022
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04.04.2022 14:06
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After a few stressful minutes of crawling through the cramped vent space, and Porsha complaining that Gold kept stepping on his tail, they made it to another vent. Key peeked out the slats to peer around the room. The brightly lit lab was quiet. After a few more moments of tense silence while Key scanned the room, he nodded and held his paw out to Gold. She silently handed him the screwdriver and he set to work. Suddenly, a large CLANG! echoed through the vent, causing all three to jump. “Hurry!” Porsha hissed urgently, his blue paws twitching nervously. Key was trying to shimmy the screwdriver through the edge of the vent to pry it open. Eventually he did—but the metal squealed in protest as it bent outward. Key, Gold, and Porsha waited with bated breath for the creature—E-13—to burst through the door. When nothing happened for a few seconds, Key carefully pushed his paw through the opening and unscrewed two of the screws to push the cover open fully.
04.04.2022 14:07
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. It swung outward, and Key lunged to grab it before it hit the floor. He let out a breath of relief and crawled out, motioning for Gold and Porsha, who crawled out of the vent and promptly whapped Key across the face. “OW! What was that for?!” Key yelped, crashing into a table which was, thankfully, cleared of anything on it. “BeCAUSE you almost got us KILLED! And you brought us bad luck!” “What in the world are you talking about?!” “When you mentioned an experiment escaping! You said what if the creature got out? Well, guess what? IT GOT OUT!!” Her voice had risen to a shrill pitch. Gold was furtively glancing at the door, but he whipped around and snarled, “Keep your voices down!” Key looked confused. “But you’re the one who mentioned E-13,” he reminded Porsha. Porsha stamped her foot. “You started it,” she huffed stubbornly. Key shook his head. Gold changed the subject.
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“Hey, Porsha?” he said quietly, nervously twisting his paws together, “do—do you think everyone survived? I just— I just hope that everyone is ok, is all.” I’m… maybe.” Porsha murmured, looking subdued. Meanwhile, Key had found a crowbar and hefted it like a weapon. He walked over to the door and tried to open it, but it was blocked. He wedged the crowbar in the crack between the door and the doorway and started to pull it one way, then the other, then he stopped, panting. Porsha walked over, grabbed the crowbar, and wrenched the door open in one fluid motion. Gold muttered something that sounded like “show-off,” but he fell silent when they walked out into the hallway. Porsha led the way, her hands shaking slightly—but she gripped the crowbar tighter and continued walking. Key reached into his satchel and pulled out a pocketknife, and Gold found a piece of pipe that was curved on one end and had bolts connected to the lip of it and carried that like a baseball bat.
04.04.2022 14:08
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As the trio walked, the building was filled with noise. Broken piped hissed, the insides of the building creaked, and the most terrifying of all, the occasional furious ROAR shook the building slightly. Gold suddenly slumped against the wall. He put his head in his paws, the lead pipe clattering against the floor. “Why did I ever work here?” he whimpered. Key put a reassuring paw on Gold’s shoulder. “Well, when we started our internship here there wasn’t any creatures yet. The company started designing them like halfway through our time here.” Gold didn’t look reassured. Another roar shook the foundation of the building, and all three shuddered. “C’mon, let’s keep moving,” Key said, helping Gold up. “That’s the best chance we have of surviving this place.” The three of them kept walking, hoping to get out of the horrible laboratory.
04.04.2022 14:09
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ORIGINAL:
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04.04.2022 14:11
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This is originally by Furyswip30! I think their account is dead so this might be the last Real Science for a while, since I only edit for fluidity. But if Furyswip does another part I will ask if i can edit that one :D Or if they really want I can continue the story myself since I think their account is dead.
04.04.2022 14:11
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And this one is longer yay
04.04.2022 14:11
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:0 why is it better then mine lol
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04.04.2022 14:12
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So do you have plans for part 4?
04.04.2022 14:13
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i got gold and porsha confused in the beginning oops
04.04.2022 14:19
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lol and yes i do plan to make a part four but i don't know when the artist will be able to do the cover art
04.04.2022 14:20
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wait who do you think is gold?
04.04.2022 14:22
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Gold is the little blue kitty and Porsha is the human wait. have i been getting them mixed up this entire time???
04.04.2022 14:22
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yes lol this is porsha
04.04.2022 14:23
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RIP MY STORYTELLING SKILLS
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04.04.2022 14:23
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XD
04.04.2022 14:23
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NO BUT PORSHA IS LIKE. A GIRL'S NAME TO ME. IDK WHY
04.04.2022 14:24
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porsha is a girl!
04.04.2022 14:25
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so lemme get this straight. Porsha is the blue kitty. Porsha is a girl. Gold is a human. And what is Gold's gender?
04.04.2022 14:25
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grrr i really thought I got this right ungghh
04.04.2022 14:26
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i think its a boy but i dont own that oc or porsha i own key but i think gold is a guy
04.04.2022 14:27
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THE HAIR MAKES ME THINK THEY'RE A GIRL THO GFDISJNDK
04.04.2022 14:28
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pygu9 efirvtuycgnyro
04.04.2022 14:29
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wait who drew Gold
04.04.2022 14:33
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idr
04.04.2022 14:16
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I MADE A MISTAKE "After a few stressful minutes of crawling through the cramped vent space, and Porsha complaining that Gold kept stepping on his tail, they made it to another vent." IS SUPPOSED TO BE "After a few stressful minutes of crawling through the cramped vent space, and Gold complaining that Porsha kept stepping on his tail, they made it to another vent."
04.04.2022 14:26
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Epic
04.04.2022 14:26
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ty
04.04.2022 14:27
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yes he did a great job
04.04.2022 14:27
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im a girl lol
04.04.2022 14:28
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she sorry i did'nt know
04.04.2022 14:29
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lol youre good
04.04.2022 14:30
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*long sigh* i need to rewrite this dont i
04.04.2022 14:33
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noooo
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