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21.07.2019
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21.07.2019 18:04
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Bethany who is 5 years old at the time was sitting in the living room reading a book. Her parents had to go somewhere but didn't tell her where. The rain outside is pouring as if someone was crying of anger from above. Bethany was skimming through the pages when she heard something. "Bethany" the voice whispered sickly Her skin crawled at the sound. She closed her book, and got up from the couch. She had a look of fear on her face. It seemed the voice came from the darkness of the hallway. She knew better than to follow the voice but her brain told her to move and follow the voice. So she walked towards the hallway. "H-hello?" Her voice choked "is someone there?"
21.07.2019 18:14
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She walked closer and peaked around the wall into the hallway. Sitting down on a old wooden stool was a vintage, green haired, purple one eyed button doll. It head was on it's shoulder and it had a wide smile that was messily stitched on its face. "W-what the heck" her expression was bewildered She had never seen this doll in the hallway so finding a doll just sitting on a stool at the end of the hallway gave her the shivers. Then the dolls head lifted off its shoulder as if it had a mind of its own. "Bethany" the voice spoke again this time more eerily and unnatural
21.07.2019 21:20
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Bethany jumped back petrified, her body was shivering of fear. She knew she had to get rid of the doll, but she was so scared that she just stayed on the ground so vulnerable and alone, or so she thought. "G-Get away from me" her voice choked again
21.07.2019 18:19
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Ooh spookey
21.07.2019 18:19
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That's really good! But remember every paragraph you have to indent and every dialogue has its own paragraph
21.07.2019 18:19
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The indent can be 4 to 8 spaces
21.07.2019 18:22
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._. Pls I just wanna do what I wanna do pls
21.07.2019 18:23
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Just sayin..
21.07.2019 20:19
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I love you......don’t forget me.... ♥️
21.07.2019 20:41
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I would never forget you
21.07.2019 22:02
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Oooh scarey
21.07.2019 22:02
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:>
23.07.2019 15:30
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o m gosh i LAUVE IT GIMME MORE
23.07.2019 16:05
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Okay but I'll have to get get a little bit more ideas for chapter
23.07.2019 16:05
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Chapter 2
23.07.2019 16:45
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