i was really happy when @-MuckyHoney- gave me incredible feedback! she'he wasnt harsh! but like, she pointed out some mistakes, i want you to tell me whats kinda bad about my art, id appreciate it ALOT, if your too nice i will delete your comment, i am going to delete the anim later, but ill put ALL my feedback ina document for me to check at as i draw, it love that actually ,https://flipanim.com/anim=1BTt6Xi7#comment-RF0RBdNP31i3