im so so so so sorry my parents got home rip

17. I'm scared to get close, and I hate being alone I long for that feeling to not feel at all 18. The higher I get, the lower I'll sink I can't drown my demons, they know how to swim 19. mini isntrumental* 20. mini instrumental turns intense* 21.Can you feel my heart? 22.Can you hear the silence? Can you see the dark? Can you fix the broken? Can you feel, can you feel my heart?

1. Intro to the map~ 2. Hollyleaf following Ashfur by the lake, creeping up on him. 3. Hollyleaf leaps silently and starts tussling with Ashfur, then bites his throat. (can you hear the silence) Hollyleaf then bites harder, and looks at Ashfurs horrified eyes. (Can you see the dark?) Hollyleaf then lets go and watches him fall in the rocks beside the lake. (Can you fix the broken?) Hollyleaf looks away, snd runs back to the heart of thunderclan territory, where they are getting ready to leave for the gathering, with a guilty look on her face. (Can you feel,) *Flashes images of ashfur lying dead*(can you feel my heart?)

4.The clan discovers Ashfurs body, not finding any wounds. Back in camp, they are now discussing who killed him. Hollyleaf stays huddled with her brothers as Thornclaw is meowing with cats around him. 5.Hollyleaf and her brothers are out in the forest, searching for herbs and hunting. She mews to them. (can you help the hopless) She shudders with sadness and admits to them that she killed Ashfur. (well I'm begging on my knees) 6. Hollyleaf looks up at the sky, the stars clear. Rain starts to fall. (can you save my bastard soul?) She turns to her brothers, and tells them "I love you guys" before running to the tunnel, it collapsing on top of her. (will you wait for me?) [This next part is almost like memories] 7.Hollyleafs eyes. Faded over the scene is her playing with Jayfeather and Lionblaze as kits.(I'm sorry, brothers,) Faded over now is cinderheart talking to hollyleaf.(so sorry, lover) Now its crowfeather at the gathering, casting her dirty looks. (forgive me, father) Lastly its Leafpool s

-sitting still, staring at the veiwer. (i love you, mother) [memory effect ends] 8. Hollyleaf is trotting through the tunnels, lonely. (Can you hear the silence?) Hollyleaf looks around into three dark tunnels ahead of her (Can you see the dark?) Hollyleaf sits, and starts to cry. Fallen Leaves comes up, and brushes his pelt against hers. (Can you fix the broken?) It suddenly flashes a bunch of times of Hollyleaf and Fallen Leaves together in the tunnels, then back to where they were before, but this time they are both happy, touching noses. (Can you feel my heart?) 9.Hollyleaf looks up at the top of the tunnel, and it fades to thunderclan territory. 10. Lionblaze is training Dovewing, proud of her hearing abilities. 11. Shows scenes of Hollyleaf sitting with Lionblaze and Jayfeather, but in every one Hollyleaf flickers into dovewing. 12. Hollyleaf meows something to Fallen Leaves, and he touches her forehead with his nose. 13. Hollyleaf sitting in the dark, blinking at the viewer.

14. Hollyleaf happy with Fallen Leaves (the higher I get,) Hollyleafs expression falling (the lower I sink) Ashfurs body sitting limp and lifeless in the lake (I cant drown my demons they know how to swim.) 15. Hollyleaf looking to her right and seeing thunderclan. (Im scared to get close) Hollyleaf looks to her left and sees Fallen Leaves (and i hate being alone) Fallen Leaves nods to her and she walks right. (I long for that feeling to not feel at all) 16. Hollyleaf saves Cherrypaw and Molepaw from the fox. (The higher I get) Hollyleaf leads Dovewing and Ivypool out of the tunnels, and Lionblaze doesn't let Hollyleaf go back to the tunnels (the lower I sink) Scenes in the tunnel from the windclan battle (I cant drown my demons they know how to swim) 17. Hollyleaf in thunderclan camp with her brothers. (I'm scared to get close) Hollyleaf surrounded by darkness (and i hate being alone) Hollyleaf flashing hollow in the dark (i long for that feeling to not feel at all)

18.Hollyleaf being welocomed by some clanmates. (The higher I get) Hollyleaf admitting to the clan that she killed ashfur (the lower I sink) The dark forest rising, beginning the battle. (I cant drown my demons they know how to swim) 19. Hollyleaf fighting in windclan territory, then spots hawkfrost about to kill ivypool. 20. Hollyleaf gets in front of Hawkfrost, getting a deep bite in the neck. Tigerheart and Ivypool carry her to thunderclan camp. 21. Jayfeather and Leafpool sitting over Hollyleafs body. 22. Hollyleaf mewing to leafpool, put in quotes at the bottom of the screen "It's okay, Leafpool. I don't mind. I'm glad I came back to ThunderClan. I couldn't bear to... to leave without getting to know my mother." (Can you hear the silence, can you see the dark?) Hollyleafs eyes close, and Leafpool begins to cry. (Can you fix the broken?) Hollyleaf turns to a silhouette, showing a white heart that stops beating (can you feel,) Leafpool raises her head in a wail (can you feel my heart?)

Yours! :D