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maybe make the chest smaller

less pointy chin. make the body look more woman-y.

The titties look like they’re reaching for the sky Fixing it I think you should use more of a pear shape when you draw them. The width of the top and bottom parts of the arm on the bent one isn’t a smooth gradient. The arms are a bit stick-like, a good way to fix that would be putting a small rounded lump just below the elbow. Kinda like a tumor. But it’s a muscle. The shirt seems to hug to her legs for much longer than gravity would allow, unless the skirt was tailored like that. It may seem weird, but generally it’d bow in a little bit but basically just go straight down unless it was made a certainw ay