Ok I finished the linework
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Pi66baby[OP]
05.11.2022 02:11
Linkhttps://paste.pics/JM5VE
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Pi66baby[OP]
05.11.2022 02:12
LinkTell me what you guys think, is there anything I need to fix?
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hm, there seems to be alot of tangent lines.
tangent lines are basically when 2 unrelated lines meet w/o overlapping, causing the area to look flat. its hard to explain, so heres sortta an example
"><" is an example of a tangent line. ofc in text they are separated, but removing that space makes it a tangent.
other than that (and some wacky hands) its lookin good