Silverripple's story chapter 1

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Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:46
LinkChapter 1
Something slammed into me from behind. My eyes flew open, my dream fading away. I growled in frustration, and curled deeper into my mossy nest.
âWake up, Silverkit!â
I turned to see my sister, Goldenkit, grinning down at me in the dim morning light.
âWhy should I?â
âBecause! Weâre becoming apprentices!!â
My irritation immediately melted away, and was replaced by overwhelming excitement. Goldenkit grinned, purring in amusement at my expression.
âI completely forgot!â I yelped, jumping out of my nest. We were the only two cats in the nursery, and I assumed every cat was waiting out in camp.
I quickly licked down my ruffled fur, making myself look the least bit presentable.
Goldenkit and I trotted quickly out of the den and into the warm newleaf air.
I scanned the crowd of Lightningclan cats gathered in the middle of camp, looking for my friend Novapaw. She had only become an apprentice a few sunrises before, and she was waiting for us at the front of the crowd, seated by her mentor, Amber
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:47
Link you ready to become apprentices?â She mewed joyfully.
âYeah!â I cried, bouncing in the air. I had been waiting for so long to become an apprentice, it was hard to believe it was happening now.
Goldenkit nodded vigorously, her tail fluffed in excitement.
Just then, our father, Hawkstar, stepped out of his den, and in a few graceful bounds, was in front of me and my sister. His thick gray pelt rippled in the breeze, making his look just as majestic as he really was.
âLightningclan!â he mewed, raising his voice so his clan could hear him, âToday is a very special day in Lighningclan. Today, two of our kits are being made into apprentices.â he gazed down at us lovingly, his amber gaze shining in the morning sun.
âGoldenkit, step forward, please.â
Goldenkit stepped toward our father, her eyes shining.
âGoldenkit,â Hawkstar announced, staring down at her, âFrom this day forward, until you receive your Warrior name, you will be known as Goldenpaw. Your mentor will beâŠâ he gazed around the gathered cats, his
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:47
Linkfinally stopping on Thornstripe, âThornstripe.â
The senior warriorâs eyes widened, a smile slipping onto his face at the thought of being a mentor again.
As the clan cheered my sisterâs new name, I silently wondered who my own mentor would be.
âSilverkit,â Hawkstar mewed, âCome here, please.â
I smiled, and, holding my head high, approached my father.
He smiled down at me warmly, and lifted his gaze to the rest of the clan, âFrom this day forward until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Silverpaw.â he scanned the cats again, quickly settling on a cream and black she-cat, âBrambleberry. You will be Silverpawâs mentor.â
âSilverpaw! Silverpaw! Silverpaw!â the voices of Lightningclan rose all around me.
I turned to my new mentor and we touched noses.
âI promise Iâll be the best apprentice ever!â I blurted, âIâll make you proud! I promise!â
Brambleberry purred, âIâm sure you will, Silverpaw.â she tossed her head toward the entrance tunnel, âHow âbout I show you the territory?â
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:47
LinkâOh yes please!â I cried, bouncing in the air, âCan Goldenpaw come too?â
Brambleberry glanced toward my sister and her new mentor, âItâs up to Thornstripe. Hey!â she called out, âGrumpyfluff!â
Thornstripeâs head snapped toward us, a playful scowl on his face, âThatâs not my name. You know I donât like that.â
âThatâs the whole point of that name, mouse-brain! To annoy you!â
Thronstripe rolled his eyes in annoyance, âDo you need something?â
âSilverpaw wants to know if Goldenpaw can tour the territory with us.â
Thornstripe shook his head, âThereâs plenty of time for her to do that. I have a much more important job for Goldenpaw today.â
Disappointment wormed beneath my pelt, but I kept my mouth shut, thinking it was a bad idea to argue with a senior warrior on my first day of being an apprentice.
Brambleberry seemed to sense my frustration, and gazed pleadingly at Thornstripe, âPleeeeaseee, Grumpyfluff?â
âStop calling me that, and maybe we can go hunting together tomorrow.â
Without another word he turne
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:48
LinkGoldenpaw, guiding her toward the other side of camp.
Brambleberry sighed dejectedly and turned to me.
âIt was worth a try. Letâs get outta here.â
My mentor took the lead, and pushed through the thorn tunnel, out into the open forest.
As the warm newleaf breeze ruffled my whiskers, I realized this was my first time outside the camp. A new excitement thrilled through me as I looked around the foliage surrounding Lightningclanâs camp.
âWOW!â I cried, breathing in the new scents of the forest, âI didnât know the world was so BIG!!â
Brambleberry purred with amusement, âItâs much, much bigger than this, Silverpaw. There are four entire other clans with miles of unclaimed land beyond that. Itâs much bigger than the walls of camp.â
I stared at the thick undergrowth and the trees towering above my head.
âItâs amazing!â I exclaimed, still awestruck at the hugeness of my new world.
Brambleberry nudged my shoulder with her nose, beginning to head away into the trees, âItâs even more amazing the farther we go.â
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:48
LinkI dashed after her, excitement spiking my pelt at the idea that my world was bigger than any cat had ever told me.
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Brambleberry and I trudged back to camp just after sunhigh. Or, rather, I trudged back into camp. Brambleberry didnât look the least bit tired, her white and black pelt smooth, her head and tail held high.
I, on the other paw, was exhausted. I had never walked so far in my life, and my excitement at the world being so big had been quickly swamped by a wave of fatigue.
Although I tried not to show how tired I was, Iâm sure the drooping of my tail and the hanging of my head made my act very transparent.
Brambleberry turned to me, purring in amusement, âCut the act, Silverpaw. Itâs pitiful.â
My spirits dropped at her words, until I realized she was only joking.
âWhy donât you get something to eat? Then we can go back out and start learning how to hunt.â
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:49
LinkMy exhaustion immediately melted into determination, âSure!â
I raced over to the fresh kill pile, and picked out a mouse. I hesitated before taking a bite, and turned back to Brambleberry in confusion.
âWhatâs the matter?â She asked.
âShouldnât I take something to the Elders?â
Brambleberry purred, âThereâs plenty of apprentices around. Iâm sure theyâve already eaten their fill. But you can go check if you really want to.â
I nodded, and picked up the mouse, trotting off in the direction of the Elderâs den.
When I pushed through, Novapaw was already there, her face screwed up in disgust at the mouse bile she was using to do the Bristlescarâs ticks.
She looked up to see the mouse in my jaws.
âDid you catch that?â she mewed in amazement.
I shook my head, dropping the prey at my paws, âNo. I havenât learned to hunt yet.â I turned my attention to Bristlescar, the only Elder currently in the den, âWhereâs Lilystep?â
âIn the medicine den,â Bristlescar rasped, âSheâs got some sort of belly ache.â
Rose621[OP]
09.08.2020 17:49
LinkâAh. Then I suppose she wouldnât want this mouse.â
The Elderâs gaze softened, âI suppose not. Is that for me then?â
âOf course!â I mewed, pushing it toward her, âI thought you might be hungry.â
Bristlescar took the mouse gratefully and began to eat.
âHave you eaten yet, youngâun?â she mewed between bites.
âOh no,â I shook my head, âElders are supposed to eat first, right?â
Bristlescar purred, nudging Novapaw playfully, âMaybe you can learn a thing or two from this one, Novapaw.â
My friend rolled her eyes, and continued her chore wordlessly.
I dipped my head respectfully to the Elder, and made my way back out into the clearing. I looked through the freshkill pile, and found another mouse, a bit smaller, but enough for me.
As I settled down to eat, I looked around the camp, joy surging through me. I was finally an apprentice, on my way to becoming a warrior. And I made myself a silent promise; I was going to be the best apprentice Lightningclan had ever seen, and I was going to be the best apprentice e