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23.05.2018
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23.05.2018 00:13
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I'm going to go through everything on JASG and review it based on my first viewing. I haven't seen any of it yet, except the second post on the page, which I'll go into in a sec. It seems like it will just be a basic highschool anime plot, where we follow harry potter and his pals, and goku learns he's the chosen one, so her friends help enoby defeat the evil decepticons or whatever.
23.05.2018 00:15
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Cameo Literally nothing to be learned from this. Except that my anime guess was right. Neko neko niii!
23.05.2018 00:17
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Epilogue 1 An epilogue at the start, bold choice. I'm kidding, I know it was meant to be "prologue 1" To be honest, this isn't evenna prologue, it's like a teaser. Still know nothing about the story.
23.05.2018 00:23
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Epilogue 2: Again, prologue, but now I know some story. Info dumped on me like it's a self published novel (zing) Okay, so the cat ears were a deformity, as was a tail? I'm not sure that's how deformities work, or that you should be calling the disfigurments, but whatevs. I think that cameo might be bullied for bein a catgirl, but irl I think most people wluld find it ****ing awesome, but I guess it's up to the author that everyone's weird.
23.05.2018 00:24
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Side note, I thought it said cunt at the end, but it was just a weird way to write continued. Gave me a chuckle.
23.05.2018 00:25
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Hinestly there are so many things people are bullied for in bad YA that no one would be bullied for in real life
23.05.2018 00:29
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I got bullied at school for being bullet proof and able to fly.
23.05.2018 00:29
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Current cast: Great, now I know who'll be in the storybthat I haven't read yet. I'm not sure I'll keep up with all their names, but I'll try. Also, how common are these deformities if we have two cat girls and two with wings?
23.05.2018 00:34
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Finally, the story has started. I see TPDS is a master of "tell don't show" We now know the names of two characters we already knew the names of. But seriously, this should be the prologue, the deformity thing should be reveal and explained later, and we should see the characters interacting as friends rather than being told.
23.05.2018 00:40
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And here we meet the excitable energetic one, who isis cameo's friend despite Alex being Cameo's only friend, and what? And she also has cat ears, so why is it a deformity, why not have it just be a seperate race? Also, Alex was a dude, but is wearing a girls uniform?
23.05.2018 00:41
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Also, the other one's name is Kamio. Uuugh... I'm in for a short yet very bumpy ride.
23.05.2018 00:48
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So after Kamio and cameo decided to walk home together, the series reminded us that they were, in fact, walking home. Apparently in silence, because non of them walking home was actually SHOWN except them saying by. Then some dud cat calls cameo, and I'd think it's a good pun if it weren't for the fact that I don't believe TPS thought of it. Some dude calls cameo hot, which is false, objectively. But the guy clearly has no taste, by the look of his hair. He looks like he saw johnny bravo and went "pff, I can beat that!". So apparently Kamio is a dude? Why do the dudes look like girls, and wear girl clothes?
23.05.2018 00:53
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So Cameo comedically turns them down, but the dude cranks it up a notch and just straight up tries to kidnap her. This tone switched so hard that my mind has mild whiplash. It would have been worse, but unfortunately I was not at all invested in the story. So Alex, thecsweet transvestite jumps in to kick the guys through a tome warp to rose tint cameo's world because he thinks she's a hot patootie. Apparently Alex is a stalker and Cameo should get a restraining order.
23.05.2018 00:58
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Also, alex wants to toucha toucha touch cameo, because she makes him a man, so once in a while, when she was going home, he was a superhero holding the sword of damocles and was prepared to say "dammit janet" over at the Frankenstein plac. Science fiction double feature (reprise)
23.05.2018 00:59
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If nobody gets that I'll be disappointed.
23.05.2018 01:02
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So the guy with the hair hit alex with it hilariously, then goes but to being fully serious and dramatic, trying to kidnap a girl outside her house in broad daylight. I'm confused as to what this series is actually about.
23.05.2018 01:05
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So then cameo attack them and calls 911. Where was Kamio?'he was right there when this went on, did he just leave his friend to get kidnapped? Why dopid nobody call the police immediately after he stated his desire to kidnap her? Why is everyone in this series retarded?
23.05.2018 01:07
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So he's in hospital with an oxygen mask on, and tells cameo that she overreacted, but excuse me the ER gave you a bed and and oxygen smash k, is this series a parody?
23.05.2018 01:11
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So at school, which the text says despit it very clearly being at school, a super fast girl effectively stops time to put her leg out to trip cameo. I know she's super fast because she moves her leg very leisurley and is not caught. I'm supposed to think that this is because she is a cat girl, but, counterpoint, that's dumb.
23.05.2018 01:17
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Here we meet allthe characters again for the third time. Looking at this, it turns out mackenzie the bat wing girl is one of ca.meo's bullies. Why would she bully someone for their deformity if she also has a deformity? Please explain. Also, alex and kaamio are dudes, but they're clearly wearing girl's uniforms. They should have shirts and ties, not that weor scarf thing girls wear in japanese media. If you're going to be a huge ****ing weeb, at least know about the culture you're disrespecting.
23.05.2018 01:20
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Advice for people making a series like this, with it's own account, don't put random other shit on it.
23.05.2018 01:25
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Cameo like, straight ***** slaps McDOnalds. Thevteacher completely rightfully gives them both detention. Cameo is accepts it, but if I knew a girl to ***** slap so.eone for tripping them, and I've known a few, they would not accept a detention for it. Also, is cameo a shortfused fiery ***** who gets violent, or a sweet nicey nice girl, because it seems to flip flop.
23.05.2018 01:27
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So after detention, because this series skips time like an anorexic skips meals, McDonald's turns into slime. That's all that happens.
23.05.2018 01:30
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So, to explain to cameo why she tripped her, maccy ds turns into a demon, screams autistically and decks her. Then an angel appears. I... what?
23.05.2018 01:33
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Apparently mac and me missed because the angel pushed cammie out of the way, but it looks like she decks her and the angel appears, so I'm sticking with that.
23.05.2018 01:35
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So Angel says "swiper no swiping" and gropes cammie's tit. Cameo says the words that have been on my mind since the first page. What's happening?
23.05.2018 01:37
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So mackenzie is a demon, angel os a demon, cammoe is a demon, I'm a deon, you're a demon, everyone's a demon. How completely non-cliche. Demons, in my weeb shit? It's more likely than you think.
23.05.2018 01:41
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The sister series, called "generic oxymoronic titke" stars some girl, called Vanna I assume. Shee wishes she were a demon hunter for some reason. I'm sure this series will have a satisfying end. When I first saw this, since it goes so fast, I thought it said codename vagina.
23.05.2018 01:45
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So when demons want to com e to earth, they take over a foetus body, add animal parts for some reason, forget that they are a demon, lead a normal life, and theb presumably die and go back to hell. Also the metal as **** looking mackenzie is mealous of cammie for some reason.
23.05.2018 01:48
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So Mackenzie is jealous of Camio because kenzie likes kamio, but kamio and cameo are friends, so mackenzie physically assaulted cameo twice. Then they are friends because cameo has a developmantal disorder preventing her from acting likeca rational person.
23.05.2018 01:50
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A hiatus. Hopefully between chapters TPS learned a bit about storytelling. I doubt iy, but a man can hope.
23.05.2018 02:03
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So cammie learns she can transform by thinking "I'm a demon". Although, surely @that crosses your mind when you're told you're a demon. And the girl who told her probably thought it before saying it. And mackenzie heard that, and via a "the game" style effect, should transform. Ps, I lost the game.
23.05.2018 02:05
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Also,the chapter system makes no sense. The first chapter and second were a day apart, but chapter two and yhree happen about a second apart, which is a smaller jump than actual time skips in the chapters.
23.05.2018 02:07
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Normal little freaks is boring. More boring than JASG. Literally nothing has happened except that we know the main character isn't ca kickass demon hunter, and that her teacher is mean.
23.05.2018 02:08
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This could have been tacked on the end of chapter one or the start of chapter three. Why is this series popular?
23.05.2018 02:11
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Alex steal a cat. He doesn't take it to a vet or a shelter to get checked for a chip, he just ****ing steals this cat. What a prick.
23.05.2018 02:13
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Why didn't McDonald's or the other one tell cammie gphow to turn back, and why did cammie run away? Why didnt mackenzie ir the other one see alex just hanging around, dearly y stalking cammie.
23.05.2018 02:20
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You made me lose the game you jerk
23.05.2018 02:25
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A quiz. It says bandwagon, but a bandwagon is a trend that people take part in only because others are. I'll go through the quiz and explain my answers, keeping in mind I haven't read many comments, so this is simply from the series itself. Which animal isn't part of a character. Bat, cockatoo, white dog, fox. In the series, it doesn't say anything. In the comments, TPS says McDonald's is a bat, and that she couldn't decide whether to make kamio a dog ir fox, and I assume the unnamed girl is a cockatoo. So, no idea, guessing dofpg. 2 why do demons have animal bits. They can't have full bodies, but this is dumb and unexplained. 3What did cameo mistake nikki for An angel. It's telling that I'm just now learning her name. In non-canon material. 4 how does a demon transform By a plot device that makes all demons effectively retarded 5 what colour is nikki's bow? The comics are black and white, and I don't think she was in the co@oured cast picture. Guessing pink.
23.05.2018 02:31
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6 which intallment does McDonald's start In Chapter 2 page 1. 7 Teacher's name in nlf Peterson 8 why it went on hiatus Ipad taken away AND focus on schoolwork were mentioned in the post. Going for ipad 9how I'd rate it so far Terrible. It is honestly one ogpf the worst things I've read in my life. Not just because it's bad, but because it's hailed as great.
23.05.2018 02:32
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Got them all roght, what a legend.
23.05.2018 02:35
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Idk what you expected from a series on the green hellsite pablo
23.05.2018 02:37
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Me neither.
23.05.2018 02:45
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I mean, I at least expected a story.
23.05.2018 02:37
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So, confusing art ahoy, one character goes to a similar looking character who is drawing her. Then she has a spaz attack and then there are other characters and then just a picture of tps's regular character. I'm very confused at what the story of JASG is, but N@F just doesn't have a story ar all. Christ.
23.05.2018 02:41
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We learn that alex has a habit of just stealing cats, and meet a character. If these weren't so short, I think the story would actually run smoothly in some way. And, because if TPS's style, I can only thell characters aoart by hair, or if the haitpr changes as it iften does, where they were in a scene. Unfortunately, due to time skips and teleported, I can't keep trck of where characters are in relation to one another.
23.05.2018 02:43
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This doesn't do anything for the story. Who the **** is emilia, why is she there? Is she alex's sister? Is she his girlfriend? A rabdom "escort" he called? Please explain.
23.05.2018 02:45
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A doodle with nothing to do with the story Just like Normal little freaks. And most of JASG.
23.05.2018 02:47
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Cammie changed back into Bruce Wayne and left. Why is each chapter not just one episode?
23.05.2018 02:48
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Why did she EAT THE CAT FOOD
23.05.2018 02:50
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****, why didn't I notice that? I hope you're enjoying all my dated references, by the way.
23.05.2018 02:51
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A doodle. Better than the rest of the art. Just, put effort in, make the pages look this good, jeez.
23.05.2018 02:52
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Hey look, more nothing, what did I expect?
23.05.2018 02:55
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The art is better and the characters are easier to tell apart, but the guys are still wearing girl clothes. I'm right that thise are girl uniforms, right nyan? You're a filthy ****ing weeb a d the only person reading this.
23.05.2018 02:56
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Also, I have no clue what happened in this, please explain.
23.05.2018 02:57
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Yep, those are sailor outfits... The thing girls wear
23.05.2018 02:59
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Thought so.
23.05.2018 02:59
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McDonald's and The Other One. I'm pretty sure they're cockatiels, not cockatoos. But I could be wrong.
23.05.2018 03:00
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I don't understand, did they take a picture of kamio taking a piture of aleca crying?
23.05.2018 03:02
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This is just some non-canon stuff I think. But it doesn't make sense because neither of these characters have any set characteristics. In three chapters I still don't know how camio would react in any situation.
23.05.2018 03:03
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That's all of it so far. I don't regret this.
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