( it was for you

It's lovely. Needs a few touch-ups.. but it's great! Here's mine~! I'm not as good as you are, of course. Ehehe *smiles sweetly*

( you just conversation with monika after the poem

(( just follow what Laney says

Do you like it? (Just say what you think I'll do the rest)

*adjusts her poem and reads over it to make sure* Hmm..

Ahaha, thank you~! It builds a somewhat complex feeling, like something is out to get you, and anything that tries to help backstabs you. (I'm just making this up) Anyway, here's Lanika's writing tip of the day~!: Sometimes when I talk to people who are impressed by my writing, they say things like 'I could never do that'. It's really depressing, you know? As someone who loves more than anything else to share the joy of exploring your passions... ...it pains me when people think that being good just comes naturally. That's how it is with everything, not just writing. When you try something for the first time, you're probably going to suck at it. Sometimes, when you finish, you feel really proud of it and even want to share it with everyone. But maybe after a few weeks you come back to it, and you realize it was never really any good. That happens to me all the time. It can be pretty disheartening to put so much time and effort into something, and then you realize it sucks. But that tends to happen when yo

u're always comparing yourself to the top professionals. When you reach right for the stars, they're always gonna be out of your reach, you know? The truth is, you have to climb up there, step by step."

(I searched the writing tip up)

( is it done )

Who would you like to share your poem with next?

'' Hmm.. well, it's better than your usual p-poems! Here.. take mine! '' *frantically shoves the poem to you*