I have to write a story about a stormy valley for homework (yuck) does this look good so far?? Thunder roars deeply, as the darkening clouds loom over the houses. The red rooves revealed themselves from behind the hills. A man holding a tattered umbrella emerges from one of the houses, slouching like an old man. The fog thickens in the approaching storm, the sun hiding behind the unlit clouds, creating joyful rays of light which soon disappear in a movie-like fashion. The man watches the distance ominously, with an emotionless expression on his face. The clouds bounce in the blackening sky, light rain drizzling upon the miniature civilisation. The spiked trees looked like fencing around the edges of the valley, slightly hidden behind the thick fog.