Question
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Taboo-Lagoon 
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15.04.2020
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Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
15.04.2020 00:27
LinkWrite a new song to sing or keep the other one?
Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
15.04.2020 01:02
LinkOr I can do a Cavetown song :)
also lmao you inspired me to write a song dyou wanna hear it
it kinda sucks ngl but i'd appreciate some feedback :)
I uh... I don’t like singing in front of all my fansss. But I told everyone that if I got a specific anim to 30+ likes I would sing. And sure.
ah, i see... do whatever you feel most comfortable with, then
also here it is -->
I honestly really liked the mentality of it, and your voice is nice not gonna lie. I get your message in the song, and it comes out quickly, which isn’t a bad thing depending on your angle. A few tips: watch how repetitive you are with your words. They should be able to flow and contrast here needed. Speaking of contrast-
See a pink pretty rose- wonder if you would like it
I really like that line and how it comes out. I feel like it gives a good view about looking back.
Spring storms leave me curled up under covers
I like that one too. It leaves a good image in your head, like the storms are overhead and you can be seen in your bed. But all in all, I like it.
:D thank you
(also i got nervous when i gave you the link so i relistened to it and apparently im not enunciating my words enough so they slur together lmao that part sounds like absolute trash)
(I realized how much I wrote whoop-)
You’re welcome! And don’t worry, everyone gets nervous.
now that i got praised i want to show you other things i wrote but i cant bc they're on my phone and i got my phone taken away from me :(
also, you didn't write too much dw ^^
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lmao ive written way too many songs but most of them are half-assed bc i gave up
s a m e
i literally have a notebook filled with half-finished songs
i didnt finish like 99% of them most are like 1 sentence long lmao-