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smolfur[OP]
15.06.2022 03:32
LinkI’ll give some examples
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smolfur[OP]
15.06.2022 03:32
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smolfur[OP]
15.06.2022 03:33
LinkOk constructive criticism where I can actual learn and build off it would be appreciated
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alright
for the first one, it looks great, all you can improve on is the anatomy and thats it, other than that its really good
second one, i aint sure if i can help for it, its a bit too high for my skill level
and third, the arms are a little bit odd, i cant really explain it or know if they are meant to be that way, other than that the picture is awesome
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so, i suggest (for the meteor shower one)
you can either use a reference, or try simply making the paws slightly larger, (the legs are great but the paws take it off a bit)
on the first the head could be a little farther back since it being on the neck in the way it is makes it look a bit like a dino
thats all i know, im sorry-
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I’m trying my best but I can’t really find anything to improve! Maybe play with coloring your line art more, change colors to match color of fur to make it look more natural? But then yet again I have no right to talk because your shading and lighting surpasses mine on monumental levels! ( I’m terribly sorry if I come off as mean! I really don’t mean any harm) (°▽°)
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One thing I noticed about the top piece you listed is that the tiger looks like it has the anatomy of a wolf. I would recommend studying the feral anatomy of whatever animal you want to draw in a feral style and block out the shapes of what you see. Keep practicing that animal's anatomy until you have the hang of it.
Hope this helps and makes sense
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Saying this in the nicest way possible but like you're art sorta has same face syndrome??
Its like where all your characters have the same/similar expression when you draw them
The second one looks alr but ive noticed throughout your art they all mostly have the same face.
I feel like you could improve a bit on that along with more expressive/dynamic bodies(??)