So I'll tell a bit of the 2nd series, by writing this little draft of a paragraph: Batpaw sees Torrentpaw, his gaze looking content. Confused, Batpaw runs over to her older brother. "Torrentpaw, you okay?" Batpaw asks, and Torrentpaw snaps out of thought. "Yeah I am." Batpaw doesn't seem quite convinced. "What's on your mind?," Batpaw asks. "You've always been at this same spot, always dozing off. What is it?" Torrentpaw looks down at his paws. "You wouldn't understand," He says, a bit unsure. "It might not come true, but at the same time, I hope it does." Batpaw gives him a comforting lick on the ear. "Cmon, tell me!" Torrentpaw hesitates, but nods. "Umm, ok."