I wanted to change the pose and the position of the character because it didn't look right and felt too stiff. I also changed the colors a little bit from pastel to more vibrant colors so the character can stick out from the background and the rain around them. The expression also changed because of the mood I was going for. Instead of the old expression which mostly said "This is so beautiful," I wanted the character to be more confused and mesmerized with the look of "What is this? It's so pretty..."

Sorry for deleting comments!.. Hope you guys like this drawing!