i add too many DETAILS

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AnimatedStuff[OP]
14.07.2019 09:06
LinkI add so many small irrelevent details that don't matter to the story at all in summaries
i write books im just used to adding details hhh-
AnimatedStuff[OP]
14.07.2019 09:08
Linkfor example, there are SO MANY IRRELEVENT DETAILS IN THIS STATEMENT
"Soon, a new customer walked in and sat down at the counter. Immediately, the Bodach focused intently on the new arrival. Odd nicknames the man "The Fungus Man," due to his complexion and his yellow hair, which resembled mold. Odd felt that this man was suspicious. It was in part because of the Bodachs interest in him, but also because of his instinct."
thats in whats meant to be a SUMMARY. i feel like im just rewriting the damn book
AnimatedStuff[OP]
14.07.2019 09:08
LinkThat's how I "summarized" one sentence. I literally made it longer.