I wrote a song abt my life...
6 comments
Black-cat[OP]
16.11.2020 04:04
LinkMy life,,, isn't so very great. It's not as good as you would think. I get bullied every day. Pushed down, then I bleed. Then I bleed. No one would help me to my feet. To my feet. I walk alone at recess, ugly words written on my locker. I hate my voice, I hate everything about me. If i leave, would you even notice? I sit alone at lunch, did you even know this? I'm the weird kid. I'm the weird kid. My mom died at age three. I thought Eileen was gonna die last week.
This was hard to write lol
wolfyart123
16.11.2020 04:07
LinkOoo that's pretty good
-Nevada-
16.11.2020 04:08
LinkDang, sorry about your mom. Honestly, this could be turned into a tik tok vent song. It's smooth, and it has a nice rhythm. I had to read it out loud at a fastish pace to get the rhythm I think you were going for. It's nice, definitely a vibing song.
Black-cat[OP]
16.11.2020 04:08
LinkThanks lol
Black-cat[OP]
16.11.2020 04:09
LinkNow that I think about it, it does sound like a tiktok vent song
-Nevada-
16.11.2020 04:14
Linkyeah^^