张佳乐
thug life
owo
First ever animation
TacoChips Legacy
Decided to shade more
Strangecat ...strange X3
36 layers 😔😔😔😔😔
64 comments
itsSam
27.12.2019 15:32
Linkok zoomer
IceDragon[OP]
27.12.2019 15:32
LinkOk
itsSam
27.12.2019 15:34
Linkyou should try focusing on deepening the shading, and adding a few odd highlits to make it look better
IceDragon[OP]
27.12.2019 15:35
LinkWdym I’m honestly proud of the shading
itsSam
27.12.2019 15:36
Linkits good but its lacking the depth and there are a few unshaded areas that should be shaded
IceDragon[OP]
27.12.2019 15:36
LinkLike the tummy? Where?
TheSATISFYER
27.12.2019 15:39
LinkItsSam is right. Add some shading technique to this.
ProMagma
27.12.2019 15:59
Link:eyes:
I think it works, its the style they're going for :P
Idk if you think that many layers is an achievement but in actuality it just seems like your workflow is totally asinine for lineless art. You can consolidate things at least, with no layer organization how are you supposed to work? From my experience having more than 5 lags down the site so bad it’s impossible to work.
And yes what that other person said the way you’re shading makes everything blend together I can’t tell what part is what or if they’re a part of the same arm cause everything’s shaded like a promagma ripoff
Like, you can’t just scribble low-opacity black over the whole thing and call it hair. It looks bad.
@SmilingNyan stop critiquing it. Only icedragon tried and we gotta make the most of it.
I gotta write a whole paragraph to explain myself so I don’t just say “lots of layers bad” with no explanation cause that’s ,,,,,,,,, dumb
Glad u didn’t just scribble but there are some places where it isn’t going to same direction of the form?? I expected it on the hair to go a different way
I’ll crit if I want lol I post comments like this so people hopefully can learn something and improve, if in a kinda mean way. If they don’t want to improve or don’t like my advice they can just not listen to me.
Yeah most of the fur is going to right direction!! It just looks a bit weird on the hair bit and muzzle yknow? I didn’t look super close and thought it was scribbles but I was wrong and yeah that was dumb on my part.
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I think that if you’re going for a more cartoony style you could include more highlights? Real life doesn’t actually have that many but they’re so much fun to draw and make the character pop a lot (IMO). Just putting darks makes the character look like they’re in a dim room at least to me
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Ok I’ll chill now just wanted to try and help somebody out but I get the hint lmao (this is not passive aggressive or guilt tripping)
My brothers They aren't really good drawers. At least just they think so. On paper they're good, but on social media and digital art, not rally that good so, yeh
DONT OH MY GOODNESS
it’s better to look at real images for reference. Otherwise you’ll be studying a study which will make your art two steps removed from reality.
This is common art advice everyone says.
it’s not better than a photo. No matter how perfect you think it is there are going to be things that are off about it. And there are the lines from blending in flipanim that aren’t there in photos.
Also, not all of their work is that great
Dude at least Promagma is trying and he's one of the best animator on here.
I’m not saying their art isn’t good I’m just saying it can’t substitute for a photo. No need to get defensive.
And I’m gonna leave that best comment alone. I can feel the salt