QuietFire
7 comments
SnowBush[OP]
17.06.2019 18:34
LinkQuietFire
-Female
-Current:WindClan
-Past:ThunderClan,RiverClan
Mother:Unknown
Father:Unknown
Siblings:Unknown
Mate:Nobody
Kits:Nobody
Adopted kit:SmokeOwl
Personality:Usually sad,acts to be happy,has trust issues,has anxiety.
A lil bit of backstory:
Quiet found Smokekit alone in the forest.She decided to take it and to tell it was her kit.She actually did and got away with.Soon Smoke grew up and stuff and her real parents who were kittypets before joined Thunderclan.They knew it was their kit so they took her back.So they knew Quiet took the kit.It seemed like she was stealing it but it was alone in the forest and she didnt want it to get hurt.Quiet left thunderclan and was in riverclan.She also left riverclan and currently is in windclan.Her life is messed up.
OwoTheFurr-E
17.06.2019 19:25
LinkI feel like the backstory could be a bit more detailed, and if you knew how to use the spacebar that would also help, but it's an impressive drawing tbh.
SnowBush[OP]
17.06.2019 20:07
LinkIts not a full backstory -.-
SnowBush[OP]
17.06.2019 20:14
LinkBut ty
SnowBush[OP]
17.06.2019 20:24
Linkalso wdym use a spacebar?Do you mean their names because they are suppose to be like that-