CinderPelt
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Kitty924
12.01.2019 16:31
Link*Whispers*Memefruit is a warrior cat weeaboo like me
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
12.01.2019 16:33
LinkShhshhh
Kitty924
12.01.2019 16:34
LinkXD
*inhale*
I CAN EXPLAIN
Ok so basically my interpretation of her character is that she existed just to have a love drama with Firestar and to stand as a metaphor for the fact that you don't always get what you want in life. When she dies I only felt sympathy for Leafpool and Firestar, yet I felt nothing for Cinderpelt herself. Then she immediately get reincarnated into Cinderkit (Cinderheart). Why this happened? There is no explanation. It seems as if the Erins just put it in to make it more complicated to write. We never know exactly how this works, due to the fact that one tie Cinderheart and Cinderpelt are treated as the same person, and later on they separate. Also, why Cinderpelt? She wasn't important. She was just a crippled medicine cat. I'm sure there are plenty of cats they also could have reincarnated, but why didn't they? Over all, I think that they made her seem to important, and I would have preferred it if she maybe had beef with Sandstorm. I think this would have made the books
-that included Cinderpelt much ore interesting. It could have also ade Sandstorm a point of view character, maybe she could have shared a whole book with Cinderpelt.
that was unessicary
There are thousands upon thousands of cats in Starclan, I don't thing Cinderpelt was the only crippled one. I just think the whole thing is stupid, and Cinderheart would have been a better character if she was her own cat, instead of living her whole apprenticeship know she shares a body with a dead cat.
This is cool!
But can I offer some constructive criticism? It's okay if no!
Okay, first of all, lets talk limbs
Cat limbs aren't like straight fries. They have curves and stuff. Look at a reference to get a basic idea. Also, the paws on the front legs are normally smaller than the back ones.
Use this as an example. The top left corner one.
https://www.google.com/search?q=cat+reference&safe=active&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjy7JyR1LLgAhWIHXAKHRNuCU4Q_AUIDigB&biw=1440&bih=826#imgrc=b4P-x59fWu5V9M:
Second of all, the face.
The eye is huge. I know that's like a style and stuff, but its bigger than the leg. Try shrinking it a little.
Also, muzzle. It looks like a fox muzzle. Cut muzzles are a little flatter and have more defined shapes. Again, use the reference above.
Finally, the lineart is a little messy. This is easy to fix, just clean them up a lil.
You don't have to follow my tips! I mean, I'm not very good at anatomy either. But heres some some advice so you can improve owo ^^